Feedback appreciated, the second part still needs work

The World Revolving.. Orchestra? (Draft 1)

sometimes i ask myself, "why do you still open soundcloud?"
then i remember there's cool people here (you know who you are)
thanks for being cool
that's all, keep doing what you're doing

Just like the dog... I play it by ear. (Eyyy, get it?)

im just gonna chill here and post some bullshit before i make an account for actual music Lol!
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also go check out https://soundcloud.com/autourney it's the coolest fucking tourney ever

Trash where I only upload songs that I like and post other nonsense, all the songs uploaded to these accounts go to their respective creators.

Don't forget the ones that were here before us, their stories and experiences still live through us.

[𝐉𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐚 𝐠𝐮𝐲 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐩𝐨𝐬𝐭𝐬 𝐰𝐡𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫. 𝐂𝐡𝐞𝐜𝐤 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐦𝐲 𝐩𝐚𝐠𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐧 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐦𝐞. ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ ]]

 https://mylesmania.straw.page/

𝐃𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐝: 𝐩𝐢𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐲𝟔𝟒𝟐𝟑

PFP by me, banner by Angileri4
Hi, I'm Rudi. I mainly just use this to repost songs for me to listen to later. I make art sometimes though!
Discord - radiantrudi
Tumblr - https://www.tumblr.com/radiantrudi
Twitter - https://twitter.com/radiantrudi/
Deviantart - https://rudithedudi.deviantart.com/

I don't post a lot, If I do the quality is dog water sometimes lmao 

The World Revolving.. Orchestra? (Draft 1)

Sully Orchestration