i think you can rap, but I think you're a little too focused on saying as much as possible. try saying more with less. when you shove so many syllables into a short amount of time it kind of makes it all feel empty, ya know? Like you're just saying shit that rhymes. the beat is fire tho and if you could be more poignant and less convoluted with the way you spit, you'll definitely get better

You have really nice flow, fits the beat really well. I would recommend making your voice a bit louder, it can sometimes be a bit hard to hear you.

I have a lil problem following the lyrics, but the flow is nice, and I like the beat.

Prod. by Starlon
Written in a foreign country. Recorded after my return.
As always, I hope you enjoy and all criticism is greatly appreciated!

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