This is good. Bass is nice and weighty. The snare sound is horrible BUT, and I mean this sincerely, entirely appropriate for the track so it's actually perfect, if that makes any sense.

To me, the intro is far too long, and not enough things to keep me interested.

TBH i found this song a test of endurance.

Generally good stuff. It felt a tad repetitious by the end, but that's, I think, part of what you're aiming for.

Your sounds and production are good but the composition needs more interesting new elements to play and less repetition, at least for me.

Ooo, one of my favorites in this month! Somehow very subtly, everything, including the cover, the first sound, the exciting dimensional rhythm and mysterious harmony, plunge you into the atmosphere of an inexplicable incident in distant space. Turn on your imagination, and it's like watching an interesting short sci-fi movie!

perfect for the title and the image. very well crafted atmosphere. i want to see the film.

i do agree that some more variation, new elements or development would help a piece of this length...

Entry for KVR's One Synth Challenge #146.

Synthgeek - Derelict Craft

Music from my various projects, occasional audio experiments, and noise from my DIY devices.

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