Tried to improve the mix (and a bit of the drum arrangement) of this song somewhat using the techniques I've learned since. I was apparently having trouble getting the vocals to sound right - this was before I figured out my usual vocal effects chain that sounds a bit like how The Radio Dept. does their vocals.

Everything ('24 Remix)

(after gorilla biscuits, 'start today', 1989)

ROSENSPUR - START TODAY

ring about your prose and your prizes as quickly as they think
pushing backwards those flies and their feuilletons closer to the brink
for those boys are dead and their overheads line single to their costs
and for all that they know - their externalisation is their loss

[refrain]
i've got a tail
i've got a tail to remember
have i got a tail?
have i got a tail to remind me
the screens in the bars are switched to the stars and
the waterfront doors will clink?
for the breakers might swivel their stools to your level
but their eyes just drain their drinks

poor little martha went over to thomas and elfelt by the train
emptied the fares from her stockings and pockets got caught up in the rain
of course she sent in for help from the dhl and the foremen on the docks
headed down fuller and western for parking - she couldn't find a spot

[refrain]

for a world to the words you spent
and the papers that you left

(cover: c0rvuscor4x on DeviantArt)

ROSENSPUR - TAILED

I live on an island.
I make dreamy, vaguely nautical pop in my room.

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