hey cool track! nice work also love the gingerbread man

The guitar is so lush.  I like the bass line a lot but it sounds a bit out of tune.  I like how it moves and I think it makes the song unique please redo it.

You're so pretty I could dive into your eyes baby.
I could lose myself so easily in your belly.

But tell me something I don't know yet.
Mesmerize me.
Show me your wisdom before it's all gone.
You're seldom that sound.
But tell me something I don't know yet.
Do surprise me.
Prove me you’re more than this fantasy.
Damn you’re pretty.

I’m uncertain. Do I love you? Ain't that funny?
Considering the time we've spent in bed honey.

But tell me something I don't know yet.
Mesmerize me.
Show me your wisdom before it's all gone.
You're seldom that sound.
But tell me something I don't know yet.
Do surprise me.
Prove me you’re more than this fantasy.
Damn you’re pretty.

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