This is immensely seductive. (Does that say something about me?)

I love how the rhythm of this song starts at a place I didn't expect with the lyrics.  I want a bass line and drums backing it up! Very intriguing!

Good work Paula. I like your willingness to use sparse guitar, and even allow silence at spaces. Good command of tone and pacing.

Really cool, Paula.  I really like the mood of this.  Bulletproof is a great title.  The lines you conclude with are ones I especially enjoy!

So, someone said to me "you're sh*t crazy" while I was talking about some old relationship and it inspired this very quickly written song,
It still sounds like a song I've already heard before to me, so if it makes you think of any song, let me know please haha.

Lyrics:

I'm gonna make it right this time,
I'll tell you all the things that could go wrong or right.
I'll tell you all the things that you could find
under a rock about me.
People will tell you that I'm sh*t crazy
but hey, you could just take it or leave.

I'd hate to disappoint ya, don't say I didn't warn ya.
Girls like me like so much to leave,
boys like you don't like much to lose...
Built up hearts feeling like bulletproof.
I'd hate to disappoint ya, don't say I didn't warn ya.
Girls like me fall so easy,
boys like you wouldn't know what to do...
Built up hearts feeling like bulletproof, oh...

I'm gonna make it right today,
I'll tell you: all I want is things to go my way.
"Oh she's like a witch, she's just casting a spell"
"Boy, if you'd knew better
you'd pack up your pride and your things
and you would say farewell"
Well you could, but it's already too late.

I'd hate to disappoint ya, don't say I didn't warn ya.
Girls like me like so much to leave,
boys like you don't like much to lose...
Built up hearts feeling like bulletproof.
I'd hate to disappoint ya, don't say I didn't warn ya.
Girls like me fall so easy,
boys like you wouldn't know what to do...
Built up hearts feeling like bulletproof, oh...

Bulletproof

kind of a singer/definitely a songwriter.

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