not bad, you should redo your vocals though, and it's a little too 4 non blonds in the chorus.. the verses are decent though.

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✨"Across the Void" is the powerful and emotional opener to the album, setting the stage for a journey through space, regret, and undying devotion. Blending the raw intensity of alternative rock with the ethereal soundscapes of space ambient, the song follows a lone traveler who embarks on an unrelenting quest across the cosmos to find a lost love.

"Across the Void" isn’t just a song—it’s the beginning of a story that spans the farthest reaches of the universe, and it promises to pull you into its emotional orbit from the very first note.

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Across the Void

**Lyrics**

[Verse 1]
We built machines to carry our dreams,
But they crush the hearts in silent screams.
Concrete jungles with poisoned air,
Hands outstretched, but no one’s there.

We light the night with neon lies,
Blinding truths, we avert our eyes.
Hungry faces at the edge of town,
We raise our flags, but we let them drown.

[Chorus]
Ashes in our hands, we don’t understand,
The cost of power on stolen land.
We trade our souls for silver chains,
Dancing blind in the devil’s rain.

[Verse 2]
The earth is weary, her veins run dry,
Her cries are lost in a profit’s lie.
Cities rise, but their roots decay,
We pave the path to our own dismay.

Children born into battles we make,
Dreams dissolve with each life we take.
How much longer can we pretend
That this machine won’t break in the end?

[Chorus]
Ashes in our hands, we don’t understand,
The cost of power on stolen land.
We trade our souls for silver chains,
Dancing blind in the devil’s rain.

[Bridge]
The mirror shows a fractured face,
A human race that’s lost its place.
We build our walls, we dig our graves,
What’s left to fight for when we’re all slaves?

[Verse 3]
Take my hand, let’s break this chain,
Feel the fire, embrace the pain.
It’s not too late to tear it down,
To heal the wounds, to turn around.

[Chorus]
Ashes in our hands, we still have a chance,
To break the silence, to take a stance.
The world is bleeding, but we’re alive,
The spark of hope can still survive.

[Final]
No more ashes, no more lies,
No more fear in the children’s eyes.
The road is rough, the path unclear,
But we’ll find our way if we face the fear.

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