this beat and lyrics is likem perfect its dreamy and like beautiful lol good work def got me chill

I like the rhythm idea at the beginning with the vocal and colourful electric piano/complex drum pattern, but the timing is out in places. The intro creates colour,interest and tension, but at about 1min I wanted to hear the electric piano pattern have added to it a stronger bass/drums groove to take the song up a notch and build excitement. Perhaps some light vocal tuning and less reverb would strengthen the song. I like the idea presented in the intro and would love to see it develop a bit more in layers as the song progresses.

This track is a work in progress.  Vocals are coming together.  Notice the rhythmic permutations of the drum track versus the piano.  I like to now post these as they are being worked on just for fun.  

Love is elusive
Just when I choose 
It takes a turn
And then I learn
That I'll forever yearn
For it's return
I'll never sleep
I'm in so deep
I wish that I could keep it

Give it away
I'll take it today
It's all I need
It's something 
Don't you see
From you to me
The love you've
given freely
Something more it's
More than gold, gold to me
Its the key, the key, the key
The key to your heart

Two lives like ours
Had drifted and parted
From other souls 
That we had found
Love never lost
But just restarted
How many times?
We all lose count

We are only blessed
With the ones
God will deem so
Only a few
It would seem so
Only a few
And on and on and on
it goes, it goes
and on and on

I was lucky
One last time
What were the chances
That I might find
Another beauty
To fill my eyes?
And take away
The pain inside?
Take away the pain inside

Keep coming to me
Keep coming baby
Keep coming to me
Keep coming baby
Bring the key
You can count on me
Just wait and see
It's meant to be
I will open your heart

I found Heaven in your eyes
Such a beauty no one can disguise
I found Heaven in your eyes

Key To Your Heart

Key To Your Heart - Demo

Robert E Flynn III is a software-developer, author and musician from San Antonio, TX. He is living with his beautiful fiancé, Claudia, whose delightful, positive outlook on life has given him the motivation to finish this work. He has two wonderful children, Caitlin and Zachary, who are grown and exploring their own fantastic lives. He has spent his entire life pursuing creative endeavors. Music was his first love and still is, and writing was always part of his life. 
Robert lived in Austin, Texas for many years and was part of the music scene in the city during that time. He was a member of several bands during those days and tremendously enjoyed playing live in many venues in the music rich area. Music is a great example of our creativity, which speaks to the Creation of all things. He also lived in Denver, Colorado for several years when his children were young and then relocated back to San Antonio, Texas to be close to family.
Night of the Living Dead was recorded at Salmon Peak Studio in San Antonio, Texas.  Mark Sinko acted as the recording engineer and also contributed a guitar part on the song.  Robert Flynn’s longest friend, Brian “Red” Moore played bass on the track as well.  Brian is the lead recording engineer at Q Productions in Corpus Christi, Texas. Q Productions is owned by the famous music artist, Selena Quintanilla-Pérez’s father.  Brian also plays bass and sings on most of the tracks I currently have on Soundcloud.  In addition to Brian, other contributors and long time friends are on these recordings also.  Jerry Bazil, from Michigan, plays drums on several tracks. Bobby Lancaster, from Texas, plays drums on several tracks as well.  Also, Joe Mota, from Texas,  plays keyboards on several tracks (Sadly, Joe is no longer with us, but he was a genius in many ways musically and an inspiration to me). 
I play keyboards, guitar, drums and vocals throughout these tracks.

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