Great song and thanks for the insights into the writing process!

fantastic song..lyrics are wonderful and love the presentation

I love the lyrics too bits. What a wonderful song. Cheers

A great vocal and a super arrangement and those backing vocals are spot on!

Sounds like the soundtrack to a romantic road trip—except the car never leaves the wash :-)

Galaxy Ping-Pong

Zarine - Galaxy Ping Pomg Cut Vers.

Humans are the only species who preserve a lasting relationship from parents to children and vice versa after the offspring has reached adolescence. This can be curse and blessing at the same time in some cases, but overall it is a gift in my view. We will stay the children of our parents for a lifetime obviously. Once you have realized this and don't consider it a threat anymore you are given the chance to close the circle in a peace- and beautiful way.


Photo (c) Laurent Bayeux

One Day When it was Time to Come Home

This is the last step of this collection:
Hybrid Electro :
https://on.soundcloud.com/fWwC7RmqvaYqCgJbA

STEP EIGTH

You Leave me Breathless
Words and Music by Jennifer L. Jones (working draft)
V1
I never dared to dream this way,
That someone would come my way.
A spark, a twist of fate,
And kindness that resonates.
Your gaze, a song, you made me strong

V2
Each word you speak, I skip a beat
There is no other love for me
Only you can sweep me off my feet
You leave me breathless
You Leave me Breathless 

Interlude
With your caress, you leave me breathless
I stumble, I smile, in quiet duress.
My heart once guarded, it belongs to you
An unexpected love, yet true.

CHORUS
You Leave me Breathless, 
A love unimagined. 
You Leave me Breathless,
A story so rare.
You Leave me Breathless

Repeat Chorus

Music Dreams Productions
Jennifer L. Jones
April 2025

You Leave Me Breathless

This song was written while watching a video that Joliz shot from inside a car going through a car wash. There was just something very inspiring and contemplative about this 2 minute trip.

Video included here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqi_xf16f0M]Video

I rolled into a car wash
In a flood of soap and rain
A self-contained storm
Where the outcome is the same

Steam on the windshield
A ghost in the glass
Held an unlit cigarette
Saw the present and the past

The radio was static
Some broken English song
The DJ said “this is Berlin” 
But I knew he got it wrong

You left me in Kreuzberg
With your paintings and your gin
You said “love's a revolution”
But you never let me in

I stayed too long at Kottbusser Tor
Thinking you'd come down
In your fashion army coat
Like a queen without a crown

Neon bleeds on cobblestones
Your name in every drip
I saw your shadow on a bar stool
And a guy with a crooked lip

Now the soap’s all in the gutters
And the world comes back in grey
This city’s got a talent
For fading things away

The glass is clean on this old wreck
It’s time to retreat
And somewhere past the Fernsehturm  
The silence fills your seat

2 Minutes In A Car Wash (with Joliz)

Music, lyrics, vocal & mix  : UK Man

Electric guitars : Little Man

Shan

Surfers like Us ….. composition, all guitar parts, arrangement and mix

Artwork provided by Remnant60 (Thanks, Bill :)

Hi Everyone!
I invite each of you to listen to an alternative version of my piece called „Surf Dance” that I wrote two years ago. This song was also recorded with The Eclectic Collective as our first song together and released in July 2023. Yes, time passes quickly... 
Please check out the original version of „Surf Dance” with the Eclectic Collective 😎

https://soundcloud.com/user-411502040/surf-dance?ref=clipboard&p=i&c=1&si=B615E96AC3CA4CC5A80FAA8A7DC4CC17&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Of course, I dedicate this solo version of the song to the fantastic guys of The Eclectic Collective 🌞🏄🏼‍♂️
Thanks, guys for your friendship and love! 🍀

Hope you all enjoy the surf vibe!

Many thanks for listening and any support! 
Artur

Surf Dance >25

(Dragging My Butt) Into The Sunshine

Land of love

j'ai connu l'enfer

where I learned to stay

Music lover & singer-songwriter. Many thanks for taking the time to listen.

Unless noted, all songs Copyright © Robert S. Dean.

2 Minutes In A Car Wash (with Joliz)

Robert S. Dean

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