you won't ending up in ladt place as your song title. it's a good melodic/harmonic arpeggio, but i think it needed a building around to be a great track, other layers...a rhythm track...more elements(imho)

it's pleasant enough. but not one of my favourites of yours. for what it is - I think you'd be better off making it 3 mins long. it doesn't warrent 5 mins.

I'm amazed this wasn't Single Instance. what did you use 12 instances on??? 😁

Darn !  I so wish you would have developed that little intro into further hauntings. This was way too short and abrubtly cut short. It sounded extremely promising to me. And could have been a wonderful counterpart to the bright keys, that do indeed go on a bit long. On the other hand, they do have a very pleasing texture/timbre. Very smoothy grained, very friendly to the ears.  So in that regard, I can see why would go on improvising for so long. :)

I thought this was a single instance piece too. While there was some elements that had promise it felt to me like there wasn't enough variation and the main sound you used got more grating to my ears especially with the reverb as the track went on. I would try adding some percussion or something.

This is begging for some parts on top - a lead that starts gently and builds into a soaring melody would be a great addition.

This is a really good backing track that is missing the elements that would turn it into a fully formed song.

why not add some moderately loud low taikoish drums in the back to provide for some change.

Manueilla

Track made only using ToneZ 2 Synth by Retornz
DAW: Cubase 13 pro
- 15x ToneZ 2 Synth by Retornz
- 1x Couture on the Closed Hats
- 1x PanCake on a pluck
- 1x LoudMax64 on the master
Stock DAW Plugins: Multiband Compressor, Magneto II, Frequency, Maximizer, Brickwall Limiter

ToneZ 2 184

MiJoFranDa - Neptune - ToneZ 2 - OSC184

Here's My OSC for August made in Bitwig using Charlatan3 and dBlue Glitch v1.3

with 13 instances of Charlatan3 and 2 dBlue Glitch

VST: 
Air2
BusterSe
ClipStar
Free Clip2
KHS Trance Gate
Limiter No6
LoudMax
NightShine
SuperCharger
TDR Kotelnikov
TDR Molotok
TDR Nova
TDR VOS SlickEQ
Valhalla Supermassive

Bitwig:
Convolution
Delay-2
Drum Machine
Filter+
Focus EQ
Key Filter
Note FX
Sculpt EQ
Tilt
Tool

Coconuts in the rain

This is my entry for the One Synth Challenge  #187 ExtraBold by Nakst

DAW: Studio One 6
Synth: 	12x ExtraBold

Studio One FX: Splitter, Open Air, X-Trem, Channel Strip, Analog Delay, Pro EQ, Compressor, Limiter

Other Free FX: Valhalla Supermassive, Solaris, Raum, Deelay

Don't be afraid to end up in last place

Don't Be Afraid Of Ending Up In Last Place (OSC 187 Extra Bold)

Sāmoa Amelika/American Samoa - Matou

As part of American Oceania, American Samoa is a territory of the United States in the South Pacific. American Samoa is part of the Samoan Islands and borders the independent state of Samoa to the southeast. The largest and most populous island of American Samoa is Tutuila, with its capital city, Pago Pago.

A special cultural feature of the entire archipelago is the coexistence of a modern American lifestyle and Samoan traditions.

During World War II, American Samoa temporarily gained greater strategic importance for the United States between 1942 and 1945, when the construction of a naval base and an airport (Pago Pago International Airport) was decided upon.

Critics describe American Samoa's lack of self-determination and its control by the US government as a colonial relationship. The territory has been on the UN list of non-self-governing territories since 1946.

Don't Be Afraid Of Ending Up In Last Place (OSC 187 Extra Bold)

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