Excellent vocals. Clear & distinctive sound.

Oh yeah!!  Tremendous Byrds vibe here.  The lyrics and phrasing/rhyming cadences are super effective.

Good imagery and almost a 60s folk-rock kind of sound which has got to be a good thing

Nice nostalgic quality to your style! I appreciate it

First song I hear from you, so sweet. Will check out more. I do feel like the rhythm guitar is a bit loud in the mix, but it's a matter of taste.

Nice flowing melody. Well structured for sure. Congrats!

Your melodies are amazing!  Great songwriting.

Artwork: Robbie
Written and first recorded in 2016

Rise from the dead, come on sleepyhead,
There's a new world to be seen.
We'll go explore, and open the door to the dream.
Old memories fade, new ones are made
On the trail dividing the hills.
We'll find the way, follow the day past the stream.

Curtains of light, green, gold and white
All along the evening sky,
Silently move, shifting along with our eyes.
Ask a for a sign, moments sublime
That will lead us through the trees.
On to the shore, there must be more than we see.

Night tears, the darkest fears and rain dissolve at dawn,
Then the light lifts our sail, sets the course, tells the tale,
Helps us glide through the gale.

Back to the dead, resting your head,
There's a new life that we've seen.
Opened the door, met at the shore of the dream.
Now that we fade, we're not afraid
Of the trail dividing the hills.
We passed this way, followed the day down the stream.

Night tears, the darkest fears,
And rain dissolve at dawn.
Then the light lifts our sail,
Sets the course, tells the tale,
Lifts our hearts when we fail,
Helps us love on the trail.

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