Very nice songwriting! Such smooth and beautiful vocals!

A beautiful evocative track, and just gorgeous vocals …

Excellent vibrato on your voice and beautiful but heart broken lyrics. (Sorry I hade to repost my comment for spelling) Yes I said before Ian Curtis from Joy Division was well know for his deep meaningful lyrics before he sadly took his own life. Serious loss of talent in the music world for sure. Joy Division's hit song was Love Will Tear Us Apart. Though he was dealing with Epilepsy.

Without words...stunning. I like your Norwegian version even s little better. But both versions are great, Janne.

Frescoes

Recorded/Mixed: Audacity
Guitar: Cort MR710 LH NS
Mic: Rhode USB Mini

Lyrics: 

I'm gonna write another love song
For my mother
In an attempt to be strong
I became the perfect son.
I'm gonna write another love song,
For my mother.
For my mother.

I see you, mum.
I'll be your heart, your rock, your faith in life,
So you can grow to be someone.
I love you, mum.
I'll be your hope, your world, the one who always,
Fills you up.

But mother, mother!
The price I pay for this role-
Oh mother, mother! 
Is taking too much toll. 

Cos as I write another love song,
Even all, these years after you're gone-
As I write another love song,
All I know is how to grow,
All I know is how to grow into the perfect son.
For someone!
And now you are gone, there is no one.

Who do I turn to now?
Who do I turn to now?
Turn to now. 
Turn to now.

I called to the moon,
And she reflected the sun's light,
On my heart.
I called to the ocean,
And waves of beautiful emotion,
Float around me,
As the birds flew in the sky, mother!
I called to the mountain,
And the path that I followed led me,
To another mountain,
Just another mountain,
Always,
Another mountain.
Always another mountain.

Finally I called to my heart.
The love inside,
Was a place,
Where I could start.
I could start.

Mirror! 
I never see your face in the mirror, Mum.
I often wonder, if without you, I will ever be someone.
All I knew, crumbled and flew,
Away in the wind-
Breeze touched my skin,
And I stood,
Ever so still,
Ever so still.
And a place, inside, 
Where nobody can hide,
Where even the music is quiet,
Where even the colours are blind,
Where even the senses have no mind,
Where even a scream has no meaning,
I stood there, mother.

And in that space, my face,
It looked out towards-
Another. 

I will never know what they saw.
But I don't question that they saw me - at all. 
Mother!

I wrote another love song, for my mother.
I wrote another love song-
For my mother.
For my mother.

But also now, 
For another.
And another.
And another.
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Original Poem: 

I’m gonna write another love song
For my mother 
In an attempt to be strong, I became the perfect son.
I’m gonna write another love song 
For my mother 
For my mother

I see you mum. 
I’ll be your heart, your rock, your faith in life,
So you can grow to be someone. 
I love you mum. 
I’ll be your hope, your will, 
The one who always fills,
You up. 

But mother,
Oh mother.
The price I pay for this role.
Mother oh mother
It’s taking too much toll. 

Cos as I write another love song. 
Even all these years after you’re gone. As I write another love song, mum. 
All I know 
Is how to grow
Into the the perfect son
For someone
And you are gone
So there is no-one. 
And I am lost 
In the dark

Who do I turn to now? 

I called to the moon and she reflected the sun’s light on my heart. 
I called to the ocean! And waves of beautiful emotion flowed around me as the birds flew in the sky. 
Oh mother! 
I called to the mountain. And the path that I followed led me to another mountain. Just another mountain. Always another mountain. 

And finally I called to my heart. The love inside was a place I could start. 

I never see your face in the mirror, mum! 

I often wonder if without you I will ever be someone. 

As all I knew crumbled and flew
Away in the wind
The breeze touched my skin.
I stood ever so still
And there inside that space where nobody can hide. 
Where even the music is quiet
Where even the colours are blind
Where even the senses have no mind
Where even a scream, has no meaning. 

There I stood mother. 
And in this space,
My face. 
Looked out towards another. 

I will never know what they saw. 
But I don’t question that they saw me - at all. 

My mother. My mother. 
I wrote another love song
For my mother. 
But also now - 
for the Other. 


© Ben -Tam Jennifer Hastings, 2024. All rights reserved.

I Wrote Another Love Song ~ For My Mother (Acoustic, 2024)

A big Thank You to https://soundcloud.com/mike-krath for providing this wonderful instrumental, mixing and mastering. I enjoyed a lot to write and sing along

One Thing

Oh, ohh
Well, well,
There are many things, that we can talk about
And there are lots of things
And there are lots of things that we don’t talk about
And there are some things
There are some things completely covered out
And there are not many things
And there are not many things that i would sing out loud
Not so many things

And when I close my eyes
It's nearly out of sight
And when I plug my ears
the words are barely to hear
And when i shut my mouth
There’ll be no coming out
Without a mouth
There’ll be no coming out,		(3)
No…

Well, there’s so many things, we can’t talk about
And there’s so many things we’ll never figure out
But there is one thing, i love to sing out loud
But there is one thing,

But there is one thing,
I’d love to sing out loud
I love to sing out loud…

One Thing (wt Mike Krath)

Lyrics and vocal by me
I made the music in GarageBand

Lyrics:

The contours of you slowly fade
You who once shone so brightly
Everything you did was stuck inside of me
In all the memories i made..

But was it you...?
Was it true...?

Or did I create an illusion
Of what I wanted you to be
My head is full of confusion
From what I thought i could see..

Was it you...?
Was it true..?

Oh, I had made myself a picture
With what I wanted so see
I really thought I saw you..
I didn't really see the truth..

I saw you...
But it wasn't true....

Was It You? (Original )

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Some new acoustic guitar stuff is under construction, but meanwhile here’s a very different beast, called 'Relentless'. About the relentless assembly line of life.

Relentless

Sparkling Dream

Recording sessions from 12/10/2023 - 19/01/2024.

MUSIC FOR FILM – ❤️🕊️🙏

presets, mixing, processing and editing: Pier WILL.
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- Made with MOOG & Modular / Multi-tracks
- Composed, arranged, performed, produced by Pier WILL & Studio 4H09
- Artwork - Pier WILL
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INTRO_2

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IN HAYAO DREAMS

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Made in #Ableton (July 2024)

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#EDM

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Space Waves

Original Lyrics that inspired Glen by Tony Harris
Vocals, Music and Mix by Glen Granthem

HE GREW UP IN THE SOUTH IN THE 1920'S
WHEN WORK WAS HARD TO FIND
A YOUNG MAN IN HIS THIRTY'S
NO STRANGER TO THE DAILY GRIND

BACK IN THOSE DAYS OF OLD
MOST OF THE WELLS WERE DUG BY HAND
WATER WAS WORTH IT'S WEIGHT IN GOLD
AND VERY IMPORTANT WHEN BUYIN' LAND

TO EARN EXTRA MONEY DURING HARD TIMES
HE DECIDED TO START DIGGIN' WELLS BY HAND
KNOWIN' IT WAS HARD WORK AND LONG HOURS
IT WAS GOIN' TO BE HIS SHORT TERM PLAN

(CHORUS)
AFTER DIGGIN' SEVERAL  WELLS BY HAND
THEY STARTED LAUGHTIN' AT THE YOUNG MAN
HIS WELL DIGGIN' REPUTATION WAS A JOKE
HE COULDN'T HIT WATER IF HE FELL OUT OF THE BOAT
HE COULDN'T HIT WATER IF HE FELL OUT OF THE BOAT

HE HAD NEVER HEARD OF WELL WATER WITCHIN'
YOU HAVE TO KNOW WHERE THE WATER IS LOCATED
BEFORE YOU PICK UP A SHOVEL AND START DIGGIN'
IF YOUR GONNA BE A DEVOTED WELL DIGGER

HE NEVER TOOK THE TIME TO DO ANY RESEARCH
JUST PURCHASED HIS TOOLS AND STARTED DIGGIN'
WOUND UP BEING A WELL DIGGIN' JOKE
THAT COULDN'T HIT WATER IF HE FELL OUT OF THE BOAT

(REPEAT CHORUS)

(GUITAR SOLO)

(REPEAT CHORUS AND OUT)

2024 © Lyrics by Tony Harris

He couldn't hit Water if he fell out of the Boat -  Collab by Tony & Glenny G's One Man Band

Hello! Iam an amateur singer/songwriter with a lot of passion for singing and Music.  I mostly sing originals,  but also covers . I like to write lyrics with meaning, something people can relate to. Not necessaraly my own experiences, it can be something i heard, seen or something someone  told me.
I am very impressed with how many talented people there is here on Soundcloud! And so much love and kindness!
Thank you all for listening,  likes, reposting and comments! It really means a lot to me❤️
I also have a YouTube channel with the same nick name 🎵
Take care!🥰

Was It You? (Original )

Janne Hennie

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