I could not get those first two lines and especially second out of my head as the song went along.  Great image "licking wounds from a lost time"; stellar.  As always love the percussive way you play the guitar.  Tone was great; performance was great.  Real nice tune; I echo the comment that this one be considered for an album at some point.

Alan it’s really wonderful to have witnessed your songwriting and production arc since I joined in 2018. This is truly amazing, up there with your best. Perfectly executed picking and brilliant lyrics!

mmm i love the groove with the guitar..nice alliteration with the first line and throught.. really digging this Alan!!

whole thing moves really well, dynamic arrangement. Cool!

really cool effect on your vocal here.  really LOVE the chords - the change at "and the sky" is delicious.  "transformed" slayed me too.  gorgeous.  receiving a truly amazing 70s singer/songwriter feel from this.  so well executed man.  this is an all-timer .... dont let this one slip through the cracks.  consider it for an album.  LOVE this song.

Is that chorus you're using on your voice! Sounds cool man! Love the guitar here too. I love how the chorus resolves. Such a cool song!

Gives the feeling of holding on very effectively.  The strumming gives the sense of something happening you can't stop but it's hopeful you can see it through.

Nice!  I like the energy of your guitar playing here!

love the long lyrical lines, they traverse what feels like several bars music, well written, reminds me of paul simon a bit. yeah man, great growth for you over the past few years, really showing.

Great lyrics.  Killer first line.  Lovely music

Witness

I once had a dream
All things unseen
Came into view

Life eternally
Breathed forth to be
With all things made new

Oh my love comes down
Sowing seeds from the ground 
Conjures day from night
Growing form in the light 

Through all eyes I see
This tragedy
Played out on stage

Through all souls I learn
Everything turns 
Across the age

So that love understood
Comes from evil and good
There’s no light without dark
Growing hope from a spark

I once spoke the word
Through the void heard
Infinitely 

When does it end
To begin again
Til we are free

Oh my love comes down
Sowing seeds from the ground 
Conjures day from night
Growing hope in the light

Witness

Down The Rabbit Hole
Music by Mark Magram
Words by Mark Magram and Joanna Brumley
Vocals by Joanna Brumley

(v1)
I fell down some rabbit hole
Took the pill that made me small
Sipping on the mad hatters tea

Thought this place was all a dream
Consciousness would rescue me
Wonderland just won't set me free

(lift)
While I'm here I'll just get comfy
The Cheshire cat just grinned at me
when does it end, I could care less
in no rush to go back again

(ch)
Won't.... You.... Come down with me
Down the rabbit hole
See where it leads

Leave the real world behind
Join me in my dreams
Escape to fantasy.... For a while

We can make this our home if we figure out how

(v2)
Every day I'm growing old
Yellow bricks laid in the road
Emerald city waits for me there

I could go home just click my heels
I'd rather lay in poppy fields
Drift away to sleep with no cares

(lift)
Here I'm loved with all my flaws
Lion, scarecrow, tin man, Oz
The colors here are fun and bright
Im in no rush for black and white

(ch)

(br)
Because we found the golden ticket
And now the factory can be yours
And we don't need to understand it
We will just roll with all the metaphors

(lift)
And we can write a happy ending
And give our tale a better end
Where all the bad guys get what's coming
And you and I will always win

(ch)
(ch)

We can make this our home if we figure out how

Down The Rabbit Hole

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Once it was magic
Now the mystery is gone
Time was so precious
Then the days dragged on and on and on and on

Eyes the mirror
Looking how did I get here
Playing the same song
Stuck in a groove
When will it end when you got no future
When will it end when you don’t believe

The bottle is empty
You might get a tattoo
Down in the dirt
It’s what you’re going through
And you’re through

Eyes the mirror
Looking how did I get here
Playing the same song
Stuck in a groove
Through thick and thin yet you got no future
When does it end when you don’t believe

Sun coming up at the end of the road
No turning back now
You must go on with the show
With the show

Eyes the mirror
Looking how did I get here
Playing the same song
Stuck in a groove
When will it end when you got no future
When will it end when you don’t believe

001 SWU Spring 22

SWU F22 W1 - Wait

Wait for the sun to fade, for the hours to pass, for the leaves to turn
Wait for the winter moon, for the distant stars to slowly burn
If all that I have to do is be patient
as long as I know that you will still be mine
If all you need is just a little time, baby I can wait, I can wait

Wait til the mountains high crumble down oh and turn to dust
Wait for the hardest steel to give its heart away to rust
If all that I have to do is be patient
as long as I know that you will still be mine
If all you need is just a little time, baby I can wait
baby I can wait, oh baby I can wait, I can wait

When the wind is rising and you're miles from the shore
When the waves are crashing down and you're waiting out the storm
If you need me I will be there, I will be right by your side
and if you need a little space, if you need a little time
baby I can wait, I can wait, baby I can wait, I can wait, baby I can wait

Wait

The Sky inside my Brain

I’ve been unravelling traveling a thin line
Licking wounds from a lost time
And the sky inside my brain
Is  turning black and cold

When its midnight and there are no moons or stars
I imagine a crack in the sky that breaks the dark
I see the dawn foretold

Now the clouds are gathering once again
As the hurricane inside my head rolls in

I remember it won’t last forever
And when its over I will be forever transformed
I’m just waiting out the storm

BRIDGE 

Waking up in a world of wild and wicked winds
In a cyclone the raging rain begins
And my shelter is torn

I keep whispering when will the skies turn clear
While I’m wondering how did I get here
My spirits so worn

When the clouds are gathering once again
And the hurricane inside my head rolls in

I remember It can’t last forever
and when its over I will be forever reborn
Waiting out the storm

The Sky Inside My Brain

Your Chance to Shine

So you missed your bus
There’s another coming
Now you’re in a rush
There’s no use in running

When the way is clear you can leave the past behind
When the futures here you’ll get a sign

You are running out of time
To find your chance to shine

While you want to fall
For the only one that you can see
There’s a curtain call
Where your true love will be

When the fruit is ripe you will see it on the vine
When the future’s bright you gotta wait in line

To dance upon the stage that you have set
To watch your own sun rise
To sing the seasons in your songs again
So love will hear your cries
And you will see what lies within

You’re running out of time
To find your chance to shine

Your Chance To Shine

I left my last rainbow in a box outside of town
It was the hardest one to lose
I exchanged my melodies for things I never found

These lonesome dreams
Where angels breathe
Their broken wings forever bound

I was born in misery it weighed my spirit down
I tried to pray my way to God
Traded in my sanity for a chance to hear the sound

These lonesome dreams
When angels sing
Their broken wings forever bound

I left my last rainbow in a box outside of town
It was the hardest one to lose

The Sky Inside My Brain

Alan Kubala

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