Nice work, great songwriting, catchy vocals and refrain!

Great track bro keep doing your thing love what you doing

I like y’all’s sound, it’s refreshing

I dig the little organ in the back. Good riff! I think the intro is a little on the long side, but at the same time the basis is so solid that it doesn't bother me all that much. Good melody writing when the vocals do come in! I do think that your delivery is a bit flat but at the same time it's not a melody with much melodic range so that does make it harder to emote. I dig the la-la-la's: I feel the Beatles influence on that part. Nice stuff!

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fu** the rich
motherfu** the job-creatin'
carbon-churning rich

must they, must they be
helping the sun kill us?

fu** the poor
motherfu** deforestatin'
fossil-burning poor

must they, must they be
helping the sun kill us?

fu** the middle class
the understanding
overshopping middle class

must we, must we be
helping the sun kill us?

fu** the economy
it’s gonna be
booming when we all have passed

must we, must we be
helping the sun kill us?

fu** the doomsday clock
who the fu** can measure
all the ways we suck?

must we, must we be
helping the sun kill us?

and fu** this vibe
motherfu** this righteous
useless, bloviating vibe

must I, must I be
helping the sun kill us?

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Helping The Sun (Kill Us)

Holy Cow - Robert Grigg & Combstead

o-pen your mind
o-pen your mind
o-pen your mind
op- mind-op mind-op

allow yourself to be 
extrasensory—
you can jump the line
you can ship your mind out to the end of time

when stuck in a reality
wiggle out supernaturally
seek and you shall find
a way to leave your body and your woes behind...

much good is hidden in a world right next to ours
so don’t you worry 'bout a thing
lest you be smitten by the heavenly powers
forget the sun, bask in the light they bring...

for as long as you have faith they’ll carry you
from one decision to another
behold the true meaning of free will
just let ‘em steer and free your will from all the bother...

and all the stories, if scary enough
don’t even have to be divine
and when the glory starts wearing off
just reinterpret all the signs

miracles await the pilgrim who is fond
of the awesome truths lying just beyond

why wouldn’t you wanna be 
extrasensory?
once you cross the line
you can lead the blind, run the pantomime

get unstuck from reality, 
walk and talk supernaturally
seek and you shall find
the oldest way to shine and monetize your mind

it’s gonna be okay
if you go extrasensory
and it’s gonna be just fine
when you productize your inner eye

and all the stories, if magical enough
don’t have to make a lick of sense
cause all the glory is only trickling up
to the visionaries keeping the pretense

the whole trifecta—
poor, powerless, and quick to pray
cost-you-extra-
-sensory

extrasensory
extrasensory

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Extrasensory (with John Byrne)

From Goddess Durga to you to destroy negative energies.

Listen  and meditate and receive.

Om Kleem Dum Durgayei

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What's in a Name? (SoundCloud Master)

A power ballad..

LYRICS:

The step is not hard to take
But over and over again
we bend and we break
The same simple mistake
at the start with my terrible heart in your hand
and you tighten the grip
on the part with the delicate need for command
It's all built in the sand

We stay awake for days
while kneeling and feeling our way
through vacuums of space
It's a desolate place
Fuel the fire with the furious ire of your soul
Feed the flames in the night
Build the pyre, an eternal reprieve from the cold
And so we'll never grow old

You've been ignoring the ballad of fire on the radio
but if you listen it's calling
You've been ignoring the ballad of fire on the radio
but if you listen it's calling to you

You see yourself as a hero for hire but we all know
there's no commissioner calling
Your alter ego's just you in a bar with no windows
and you're rapidly falling
If you cared you could still give yourself a crescendo
but you'd have to go all in
You've been ignoring the ballad of fire on the radio
but if you listen it's calling to you

You've been ignoring the ballad of fire on the radio
but if you listen it's calling
You've been ignoring the ballad of fire on the radio
but if you listen it's calling to you

Ballad of Fire

Lost Void

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Beat by Epikthedawn
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Alex Maelstrom




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Independent rock musician from Houston TX. Influenced by 90s alternative rock musicians.

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