Really liking this, Tamora! Nice melody line, and good half story!

This is the kind of storytelling that I love, hope to see it finished soon!

Fantastic lyrics! Ooh these are gold, evocative but still plenty mysterious.

Wonderful lyrics, Tamora! Interesting to learn you have tank-tops in the US too!

This is half of a story.  Perhaps I will return to this idea later.

Collide (On the Other Side)

Well you know I saw it coming
Should have never crossed the tracks
But when I’m feeling good
It’s kind of hard to turn back

Well you know I spilled the coffee
On my only crisp white shirt 
But my tank top sure is sexy
Though my sneakers have seen some dirt

Oh I know we will collide
Cause I don’t belong — on the other side

Well you know he had the money
Had a gold watch and black tie
His jokes were stiff but funny
Hard to look him in the eye

Oh I know we will collide
Cause I don’t belong — on the other side

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