I was thinking this is a real unique and cool track! Then Jingle Bells. Kind of stopped me in my tracks. Well, I'm not so sure about the carols, but it still a good track.

Jingle Bells is perfect.  Integrated in an appropriate and fun way!

Cool track, love the distance arp and the way it was building, was really enjoying it until the carols, don't think the carols work they sound at odds with the track and detract. at least for me.

seasonal and fun, unfortunately the mix seems confused and too full.

Well, a major cold the last week and a half, so mix could very well sound really off. But to be honest my mixes usually sound off anyway ;-)

The largest group of suggestions from last month was to add more bass.  Hopefully I balanced that in a little better this time.

I admit that coming out of the second verse is....a bit clumsy.  I couldn't figure out a better way to return to the chorus.

For some reason this month (probably from discussions in the general OSC thread, and the last couple of months I have really liked a few of the lower instance using tracks) I tried to take a minimal approach and use as few instances of Synth1 as I could.  Twelve was as low as I could go. 

As always, all suggestions for improvement are welcome.

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Richard Semper

Chilled Panda

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zarf

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JDunn

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