Pls give me constructive criticism on my raps

Raz Simone owned a club by the age of 19, bought a Tesla, and still hasn't made a cent off of a record; or even tried.  He's from the hood in Seattle, which most people don't even know exists.  He is also the CEO & founder of a music company called Black Umbrella.  When he sings, raps or speaks you can feel how genuine, heavy & real each word is.  He's released 4 projects and several videos in the past 2 years, & you can find them all at razsimone.com

Management: ethan@blackumbrellamusic.com

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