this lead is a lot louder than everything else

thats a really cool lead sound but its drowning out everything else

work on your mix and you've got a cool track here

The lead is rather too forward compared to the rhythmic support and bass.

I was going to say the same thing about being careful of the mix, but also watch out for high frequency aliasing -- it's fairly audible here

low pass the e-piano. ditto others. it's a nice composition.

Seems like you can pick up a lot of good advice here with the OSC gang, if you stick around. For now this is fine way to introduce yourself. You'll need to figure out proper balances between instruments to ensure they really work together for a certain effect. Pick sounds that don't compete or hide their support. All these things. Limiting, etc, etc...

welcome to OSC.  It's a journey.  Nice start.

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