Concurring with Silverpants: nice theme, it works well.  Your sound choices arewell matched too.

this 2nd lead drops in waaay too late, that's something to pay attention to if you ever try to do something similar again. It's very important to get right.

The substructure of the song sounds really good. In general, I think the sound design is well done.

Beginning seems a little cut off i think. have to put a little silence at beginning as soundcloud does that sometimes.

Very dreamy... except for the loud supersaw lead. But still lots of nice stuff going on.

the lead is a bit too loud here,  nice melody though.

It was sweet to hear until this lead emerges...

The saw lead is too much of a contrast to the subtle backing ...

The lead is too overpowering ... so much to that even the bass gets lost.

My first take on creating a track with only one synth: Charlatan

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