no im not crying listening to this ,, maybe..

can you guys plzz give me feedback on my new song yandere, i'm really trying to improve as an artist:)

Этот космос поглощает меня, я уже не вижу звезд

lyrics:

smoking club weed 
i’ve been doing bad deeds 
acid wash jeans
acid in my cold tea 
can i see it now 
maybe it’s a cold lead
like a fairytale 
losing me in my machines 

low life 
in the low light 
maybe if i hit this flow right 
i’ll control life 
take my hand if u can hold tight 
can u hold tight 
i’ve been running from this cold night 
from this cold night 

stone island rest upon my head 
wasted so much time wishing i was dead 
wasn’t feeling right 
fix my eyes seeing infrared  
now i’m switching paths 
really feel the truths that i read
in the clear light 
ridding old lives that i shed

lie awake 
dancing with the snakes 
two Fs on my waist 
nothing stays 
this whole world is fake 
kiss me in the rain 

found the key
cycles still repeat 
incarnate of a dream 
calling me 
voices in the tree 
living thru a screen

smoking on the loud 
say to turn my music down 
i can’t keep it in 
all the secret lands i found 
sprawling at my feet 
i’m connected to the leaves 
watch me breathe 
taking in the tryptamines 

prayer flags 
trees start to stare back 
abstract 
u don’t understand that 
black cat 
crossed in front of my path 
bad loops in my head 
i can bypass 

smoking club weed 
i’ve been doing bad deeds 
acid wash jeans
acid in my cold tea 
can i see it now 
maybe it’s a cold lead
like a fairytale 
losing me in my machines 

low life 
in the low light 
maybe if i hit this flow right 
i’ll control life 
take my hand if u can hold tight 
can u hold tight 
i’ve been running from this cold night 
from this cold night 

stone island rest upon my head 
wasted so much time wishing i was dead 
wasn’t feeling right 
fix my eyes seeing infrared  
now i’m switching paths 
really feel the truths that i read
in the clear light 
riding old lives that i shed

prod wstdyth

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