Really great atmosphere you've created--I especially liked the harmonizing leads a little ways back.  Great!

"In this night so serene,
With the stars above us in the sky"

"I lay down with her, the angel,
Our minds intertwined"

"The scent of roses,
the sounds of nature
They please us,… A dream…
this seems like heaven,
but no, I whine"

"In my sweet bitterness, I whine,
tears of forgotten misery"

"They beauty of the angel in despair
declines with the beauty of earth"

"Yielding me from the sins I will commit
lying to her to achieve"

04 Our Minds Intertwined

anonymousera