The chords are so beautiful and your voice is superb!

: ) such a gift for melody and phrasing. very beautiful composition and magic realisation : )

If someone played this for me and told me it was a unreleased Nick Drake demo, I would probably be tricked into believing it.  Beautiful songwriting.

like the ghostly feel of the vocal. sombre but not sad to me

Calmingly lovely...it wraps around and envelopes

Yes indeed, I also immediately thought to Nick Drake

it started off like most any other day
the distant skies holding the dark clouds at bay
in ways unexpected
the turbulence set in 
a stunning twist of fate
marking a new day

first you hit the ground
then it comes around
full circle

what wasn't meant to be happened anyway
you couldn't hear a sound as the sun began to fade
a last breath of warm wind
a preview of no win
was running cold and pale
rights bought and sold away

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