Once again trying a new direction. Any and all comments welcome!

lyrics:
gettin real tired of us
what did you say

can't make ground enough
its a losing game

puttin on clown makeup
you look insane

he's your camera   
i don't feel safe


v1: 
blankets and beacons, alone in the park
an ashen illusion, not leaving a mark

powerful feeling
an issue for god

the light of submission
the dark of a job

an analogue feeling
a digital clock

the scent of the ocean
the wind from the dock

a book filled with missives,
a portrait of all that you
encountered while countering thoughts of the loss,
the space in your mental where memories lapse

a new boy to fill in the gaps, a past
a reason for making the trek, a path

hook2:
sun goes down and i
feel numb again

reds and browns and whites!
you lost the race

come down from the night!
my high won't break

no, this isn't right!
i do not care!  

gettin real tired of us
what did you say

can't make ground enough
its a losing game

puttin on clown makeup
you look insane

he's your camera   
i don't feel safe


pfc:

v1:
try to live your life as the perfect person
leave behind your right to be versatile
choices like the light in the tunnel
fleeting and ephemeral

do i get the right to rehearse this
do i get the time to horrible
is there more to life than the whirlpool
sloshing round an endless loop

i want to end the day
without another burden

i want to see the day
when I can feel the points for connection

trider point rites // points for connection

davidwave4