You got a solid keeper here. Keeping me enaged from start to end.

I really entered into this song. I love the image of going underground. My favorite verse is "I don't care what you think about it anyway, I've got a mind of my own you see..." I like how you keep coming back to the line "Don't you worry about me." It fits well and I like how it ties it all together. Really nice!

"I've been learning about how to build a trap" is a great lyric. It's so self-sufficient, yet also vaguely threatening. Perfect for the mood of the song.

great great arrangement.  very cool hooks and immediately engaging.  this is a really polished song - man would I love to help produce something like this with you.  love the chorus, love the bridge.  this is a real keeper man.  succinct and REALLY effective.

I like that the lyrics in the chorus aren’t repeated (except the tag line) in this song and keep developing the idea.

There’s a place at the table waiting for you
Overflowing with fabulous food
A feast for your eyes you’ll be full in no time
There’s a place at the table for you

There’s a room in the house ready for you
It warm and quiet and you’ll sleep the whole night through
The memories inside will surround your busy mind
There’s a room in the house for you

You’re gone but not forgotten
You’re near but still so far away

My heart will always be waiting for you
A vibrant colorful love built for two
It will wash over you and cover all we’ve been through
My heart will always be waiting for you

Waiting For You

Fugitive From Love

press play; let’s begin again
dawn comes through the blinds again
the day won’t wait another moment to begin

pressed pause; late last night
put the brakes on a silly fight
before another hurtful word could cross my lips
they only long to kiss your worries away
sometimes there’s no other choice but to say; 
press play

press play; I choose to live; 
I won’t run, I’m not a fugitive,
I’m a basket case of inconvenient opinions

press pause, let those see the light of day,
so they won’t rot and fester away
so they don’t plant the seeds of decay
you’re the one that showed me of the sunrise
each new day that appears in your eyes
a hand that’s held, an undelivered kiss
something I’d prefer not to miss, press play

©2018 Bruce Salmon
written and recorded in Austin TX

Press Play

Fugitive Of Love

Songwriting group (SWU 2018 Summer Week 8)
Prompt:
"fugitive"

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Notes:

This was one of my favorite tracks to work on, ever. This ended up being a cowrite for an idea I brought to Don @donmercermusic and Natalie @natpricemusic. I had no idea where the story would go and Natalie had found this CRAZY (truly!) story about this couple. Go read it!
https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/morning-mix/wp/2018/08/03/a-small-town-couple-left-behind-a-stolen-painting-worth-over-100-million-and-a-big-mystery/?noredirect=on&utm_term=.cecebaa95f51

So, it's based on that. But I just love how the three of us brought it to life. WAY TO GO, GUYS!
One of my favorites!

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Lyrics:

Verse:
Table talk and wine
Thanksgiving night
Wishing on a star
To fly

Maybe there's a way
To get our hands
On something that we love
Real nice


Chorus:
Oh oh, c'mon honey
Spare me what's right
Oh oh, c'mon honey 
Let's go be fugitives

Oh oh, c'mon honey
Pass me a light
Oh oh, c'mon honey 
We could be fugitives


Verse:
I saw it in your eyes
Something I thought you'd lost
Oh, I'd do anything
For your smile

At the break of dawn
We'll grab some coffee and art
Give our bedroom wall
A new style


Chorus

Bridge

Chorus x 2

Outro
Oh, they'll never know...

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Chords:
Verse / Chorus:
Dm / F / C / A7
Dm / F / C

Bridge: 
Dm / F / C
Dm / F / C / A7

Fugitives

Don’t Worry About Me

by Jeff Plowman



I’ve been thinking about going underground
I’ve been learning about How to build a trap
Catch my food and subsist there

I don’t really know how deep I have to go
To get away from the things I fear here
They’ve got video on the interweb
That will tell me what I need to know now

I don’t care what you think about it anyway
I’ve got a mind of my own you see
What don’t you think about finding your own way out
Don’t you worry about me

Things are not the same 
It seems they’ve changed the game
Or maybe it’s just me that’s naive 
But sinking under now makes me wonder how
We’ll ever find our way out of here

That don’t mean I’m not a patriotic citizen
Careful contemplation of the world for me
Just like any other man minding my own business you’ll see
Don’t you worry about me

I don’t mind you telling me what you’re living for
You can keep on talking now
I’m locking all the doors

Because I have a plan I thought you’d understand
We can climb in my hole and stay there
If you don’t want to go you don’t have to go
But don’t you worry about me
Don’t you worry about me
Don’t you worry about me


©djplowman2019

Don't Worry About Me

DJ Plow

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