Nice pop rock song. Very catchy groove. Good arranged.

Awesome great music great track good job.😎🎶👌

In days gone by, they would have called this 'commercial' and bands would have beaten a path to your door for the privilege of recording it.  A big hit with me, Johnny.

lovely stuff.....love the fact that your songs are always about something tangible and definite

Very catchy melody and lyrics and great delivery. Mainstream potential for sure, especially capturing the desire for a "do over" in a relationship.

I like the effect on your voice here. Reminds me of Squeeze from Argybargy, maybe.

like classic talking heads or Brian ferry meets a touch of squeeze. love the concept and lyrical intricacies of interweaving different usages of time in the literal and metaphorical sense. excellent song writing and great phrasing throughout

I wrote this song last year https://soundcloud.com/johnnymc2/time?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing this is the original. I always liked the song and i think it has great Mainstream potential so i have decided to give it a bit of a Work Over, New Guitar Part & new vocal new mix, bring the bass and drums to the fore to drive the song.  I called it "Time"  last Time around, so this one is called " Second TIME around" its a song with would you believe TIME as the main character and i have tried to intertwine Time with love...I would really value your opinions on this song , if you have the time to listen :-) ...does it work for you .. Thanks in advance . Johnny

Second TIME Around

I am a singer/songwriter from Ireland loving SoundCloud and the ability to be able to put my songs up here for people to listen to and comment and to be able to collaborate with other musicians around the world is really amazing. Loving the technology that makes all this home recording and sharing possible and  i am totally knocked out by the talent out there it is frightening and brilliant and i am in awe and very happy to be part of this amazing forum.

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