Nice pop rock song. Very catchy groove. Good arranged.

Awesome great music great track good job.😎🎶👌

In days gone by, they would have called this 'commercial' and bands would have beaten a path to your door for the privilege of recording it.  A big hit with me, Johnny.

Very catchy melody and lyrics and great delivery. Mainstream potential for sure, especially capturing the desire for a "do over" in a relationship.

I like the effect on your voice here. Reminds me of Squeeze from Argybargy, maybe.

like classic talking heads or Brian ferry meets a touch of squeeze. love the concept and lyrical intricacies of interweaving different usages of time in the literal and metaphorical sense. excellent song writing and great phrasing throughout

I wrote this song last year https://soundcloud.com/johnnymc2/time?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing this is the original. I always liked the song and i think it has great Mainstream potential so i have decided to give it a bit of a Work Over, New Guitar Part & new vocal new mix, bring the bass and drums to the fore to drive the song.  I called it "Time"  last Time around, so this one is called " Second TIME around" its a song with would you believe TIME as the main character and i have tried to intertwine Time with love...I would really value your opinions on this song , if you have the time to listen :-) ...does it work for you .. Thanks in advance . Johnny

Second TIME Around

Hi, My name is Johnny Mc Farlane, I am an Indie songwriter from Ireland. I write, play, produce and distribute my own music. I try to write songs that will mean something to whoever may be listening. I try to express feeling and emotions through my music, I try to hit the heart and soul of whoever may be listening and to pass on my feelings through my lyrics and my music. A lot of the songs I write come from Personal experiences, some are pure imagination, but all try to carry a message of Hope, Fait, understanding and a spiritual message of love. I am just one voice in the wilderness but together we are stronger. Thank you so much for listening to my music. It’s a real honour.

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