Compilation of different (fanmade) versions of the track "Susie" (from DELTARUNE: Chapter 1).

04. Susie

Stuff I've written for, or ideas I've come up with that other people have used.

My Writing

This is the "Susie" replacement

This is a Deltaswap take of mine and it is not for your AU. Please do not claim it as yours, although you are allowed to extend this song, provided you give credit to the original creator. Ask beforehand.
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Introducing "PROSEMOOR". A complicated opposite of Deltarune itself. It's named that way instead of an anagram of Underswap or simply Deltaswap. The relevant swaps for now are listed below:
• Asriel - Kris
• Alphys - Toriel
• Noelle - Susie
• Rudy - Asgore
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Noelle takes the role of Susie. She is geeky, smart and a humble girl with a big heart who loves to play with her best friends. When Kris is not around, she always visits Asriel and hangs out with him as she knows Asriel hasn't been in a good condition for a while. She understands his problems and she will be glad to help and support him whenever he needs.

Rudolph "Rudy" Holiday takes the role of Asgore. He is a jovial, jokey, and energetic type, although he is a bit of a dunce sometimes. He is Noelle's best dad and he loves Asriel's family and will do anything for them, in this case, he sends Noelle to hang out with Asriel so Asriel won't have to feel lonely with someone around.
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Leitmotif:
-Lost Girl

Whether Deltaswap should exist or not at the moment. In the end, this is just a fun little project I'm making.

[Deltarune AU][PROSEMOOR - Noelle] Noelle Holiday

*Hey.
*That's my best friend you're messing with.
*But I'll tell you what.
*I'm feeling generous today.
*So I'll give you three seconds to correct your mistake...
*And get the hell out of here.

Hopeless is a roleshift AU inspired by the harsh aesthetic of Underfell, and "Mark of Fate" is its Deltarune equivalent. The harshness of the character's personalities altered the status of both the Light and Dark World, leading to a very different kingdom from the one we know.

I've seen Deltafell Susie handled in two ways: Either she's a total sweetheart or she's just an edgier version of herself. So Mark of Fate mixes the two.

Susie keeps her role, but her relationship with Kris has changed. She's still a real tough kid who's not afraid to break the rules and pick a fight, but she cares about protecting her friends from the nastiness of this world, particularly her best friend Kris. So she'll still happily bite off a face...but at least this time it'll be an evildoer's face specifically.

[Mark of Fate] Susie

made this back in 2020. was inspired by @peanutrune
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deltarune by toby fox
deltarune peanut flavor by @cheep-the-peanut-boy

Hostility

so i recorded myself saying the alfred eggman chain from this track (https://soundcloud.com/more-moonster/finally-geno-asgore) instead of going to sleep. (sorry mom ;v;)
(this was 3 months ago dang ._ .)

I have arrived here today to make a public and typically formal statement

*HI!!!! {We hope you enjoy your stay at Cyber City Hotel, Would you like [us] to help you with anything?}
*Want a coffee?
Personalized Areas Deltarune :troll:
Since I couldn't do actual vocals I just used the vocal instruments that were in jummbox and edited to make a sound they were singing to the song.
although this is just itso i was in the mindset that i was making a personalized areas deltarune au so uh i went and made an entire frucking character design.
so uh you can enjoy that.
(Song Link: https://tinyurl.com/y8g97o86)
Credits for the name and the entirety of this character goes to @epik-bruh

[Welcome To The City ITSO NYCTBA] WE'D LIKE TO WELCOME YOU TO THIS

This Replaces "Finale"

Motifs:-
- Queen
- Attack of the Killer Queen (Melody B)
- Pandora Palace/Queen

Roleswaps:-
Maus - Flowey
GIGA Maus - Omega Flowey
Queen - Asriel

[Undertale AU][Chaosarune - Maus] Elegant Evisceration

Noelle walks into the hospital room, causing Rudy to brighten up upon seeing her.

R: Hey, sweetie!
N: Hi, Dad!
R: How are you holdin' up?
N: I'm doing well.
R: How's recital practice comin' along?
R: Practicing your beautiful singing voice?
N: Y-Yeah, it's… coming along.
R: Hey, what's wrong?
N: Just… nervous, is all.
N: W-What if I mess up, in front of such a big audience?
N: And then everyone would laugh at me, and…
R: Hey. Listen.
R: You're not gonna mess up. You'll do great.
R: You've been practicing for weeks!
R: Besides, if you do mess up, no-one'll laugh at you.
R: They laugh one bit, I'll kick their asses.
N: Dad! You can't do that!!
N: Fa ha ha…
N: … Thanks, Dad.
R: Anytime, sweetheart.

Suddenly, her phone vibrates. An exclamation point appears above Noelle's head, and she checks her phone.

C: Waiting for you. Me and Jockington.
C: Come whenever ready.
C: Walk with us.
N: Oops! I almost forgot!
N: I gotta go, Dad, or I'll be late for my rehearsal!
R: Get going then!
N: Love you, Dad!
R: Love you too, sweetie!
R: You're gonna do great!

Noelle rushes out of the room

N: (I hope Berdly doesn't have to wait too long…)

Deltarune was created by Toby Fox
AETHERCREST was created by @moon5triker
Dialogue written by @epik-bruh
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Leitmotif:
- Girl Next Door (Intro)
- Noelle.ogg (Melody B)
- Girl Next Door (Melody A)
- Girl Next Door (Melody B)/Lost Gir(/Find Her) (Melody A)
- Snowdin Town(/Hope) (Melody B)
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In this take, Noelle Holiday and her father, Rudy Holiday, take the role of Kris and Toriel, respectively. Noelle is an amiable and merry yet timid girl who occasionally struggles with expressing her thoughts and feelings out of fear. She also has difficulty refusing orders from other people and is generally rather compliant, given that she is raised by a fairly strict and cold mother. However, her father tends to balance things out along with her older sister who is always there to comfort her.

She is known as the class' smartest student and is always willing to help anyone who's having trouble with their grade, her close friend Berdly in particular. She is easily scared by a lot of things and often gets pranked on as well as frightened by her mischievous neighbor Kris.

You get to control her mind using the star to give her an idea of what to do. Let's just say, you're Noelle's intrusive thoughts but in another whole level. Noelle can still makes her own decision, though.

Holiday Hymn doesn't replace anything. It's simply its own thing that musically portrays the Holiday Family.

AETHERCREST [Episode I] - Holiday Hymn (OST 3)

"*Greetings, Ancients!"
"*What canst I help thou with?"
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Rouxls-Seam
Dialouge by @epik-bruh

Hipe Shoppe

Spamley: WOULD YOU SHUT UP ALREADY, YOU [Devil In Sheep's Clothing]!?!?
Dester: UHAHAHAHAA!!

(Dester continues to laugh maniacally until a door slams open, with such force that it dents the walls and shakes the room. A large, white bear in a suit and tie walks out, and with him trails an ominous and furious aura. This is Dester's boss, Kingpin.)
(He walks up to Dester and grabs him by the collar.)

K: You're coming with me.

(He drags Dester into his office, slams the door shut behind him, and drops Dester into a chair. He takes a seat at his own chair behind a desk.)

K: You have been causing far too much chaos in the work environment.
K: None of us can get any work done, with your insane chatter and tomfoolery.
D: WHY, I'M JUST TRYING TO SPREAD A LITTLE FUN, FUN!!
D: NO NEED TO BE A PARTY POOPER!
K: And what of your own work?
K: Have you even TOUCHED any of it since they left?
D: OH, BOO HOO. WORK IS SO BORING, BORING!
D: IT CHAINS ME DOWN IN A CELL OF GLOOM!!
K: Dester. This is your job. At a job, you are expected to work.

(With a shit-eating grin,)

D: I DON'T GET IT.
K: Dester, I swear to the Angel above, one more retort from you, and I'll have your head!
D: MY, MY, IS THAT ANY WAY TO TREAT AN EMPLOYEE?
D: I MAY HAVE TO FILE FOR MISTREATMENT!

(Kingpin growls, then slams a fist on his desk, almost splitting it clear in half.)

K: E-NOUGH!!

(Reaching across the desk, he grabs Dester by the throat and hoists him in the air.)

K: I have had ENOUGH of your attitude.
K: Your pranks are childish and unfunny, your retorts are infuriating, and your demeanor is altogether unpleasant.
K: You have cost the company thousands of dollars with your little "practical jokes".
K: Nobody wants to be around you for more than 10 seconds.
K: You serve no purpose in this world.
K: All you do is bring others down.
K: Even your caretaker secretly despises you.
K: In fact, it would be better…
K: If you NEVER EXISTED.

(Dester falls silent. The normally-smug look on his face has fallen under the bear's scorn.)

K: …
K: I am going to give you.
K: ONE. More. Chance.
K: I have some papers that I have copied.
K: You will go into the basement…
K: And fetch them for me.

(Kingpin throws Dester to the ground, then stands up.)

K: And, to ensure that you do not pull any more of your funny business…
K: I will accompany you.
K: Let's go.

(Kingpin opens the door and pushes Dester out of the room, following behind.)
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Feel free to use this in anything you want as long as you provide credit.
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Follow the adventure of a clown on his journey to save the dark world from destruction in this exciting game of light and dark.

Plays during scenes where Kingpin is being cold.
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Leitmotifs:
Chaos King

Don't Poke the Bear [Lightswap]

Toby Fox - Deltarune - 4 Susie

4 - The Power Of Mean Girls

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Don't Poke the Bear [Lightswap]

Lightswap Original