What a message--love melody and vocals !!!!

Wow. Well done. I like your vocals. Sounds a little bit like Rod Stewart. You could cover him.

Really great vocal performance on this, guitar sets it up so well.

Damn, this is amazingly great!!! What a wonderful work!

Amazing collab, gentlemen! Excellent songwriting and vocs!

Expressive and tender.  Really terrific job you two! Durge

@the-guitar-jedi: Yes, Jimmy is amazing, it's always a great honor when I can work with Jimmy

great storytelling song. Nice atmosphaere

Lyric and vocals by James (Jimmy) Rivas    https://soundcloud.com/j-rivas
Melody and Music by Martin Hirsch

Once again I have the great honor of doing a song with Jimmy Rivas. This song means a lot to me, it's the most important song I've written so far. This is a song with a great message. And Jimmy implemented my thoughts perfectly. Jimmy wrote wonderful lyrics and it really touched my heart. I thank you Jimmy for your wonderful voice. So Jimmy, thank you again for a wonderful collaboration. It was a great honor for me. any time

Lyrics by James Rivas
As I walk through this world-I see the sad state of relations-the sad human conditions I see-
A mother works 2 jobs-her son is full of frustration-he says mom I need you to give more than one second to me-
I know your time seems to always be taken-your putting food on the table-that's how it must be-but I'm asking you now if you could please somehow-just give more than a second to me-
I've tried to be good-but I miss your attention-I know you work real hard but if you could just give more than a second to me-
Maybe one day mom you'll look back and say-you were glad you gave more than a second to me-
A homeless man on the streets-he's seen better days-he scrounges for money-as the world turns away-he begs please can you give more than a second to me-
He once fought a war-he did it for his nation-he's asking please can you give a second to me-
We seek the truth to avoid frustration-we see our world and we want to change what we see-
I live my life-but my only suggestion-is that you give more than a second to me-

Give Me More Than A Second by James Rivas & Martin Hirsch

My name is Martin Hirsch, I work with  Mixcraft 9 and 10 / Ableton Live 10 / Steinberg Cubase and Studio One Music Programms / Computer win 11 / Focusrite Scarlett 18i20 Interface / KRK Rokit Powerd 6 and ADAM AUDIO 7 Studio Speakers / Midistart Keyboard / Novoation Launchkey Mini /  Austria Audio AKG OC 818 Microphon . I only work with Loops that are licensed and legally purchased

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