This is an absolute star in your fine treasure trove of music my friend. Your guitar playing, your singing and harmonies are superbly done. Thank you for a wonderful time with your music. ;)

Great song Jim. Lovely vocal melody and instrumentation. Reposted!

a demo that sounds like a classic Jim -- lotta Dylan tunes that ain't as good as this, imo

This is such a beautiful well rounded song, Jim. A welcome visitor I assume :)

Your work is always inspiring to me but this is something of a perfect song. Structurally and the effect it has on this listener. Bravo Jim

a  demo of a song that visited me earlier today.........cheers for having a listen


What Goes On 


sometimes it feels like I'm going round in circles again
and when the train stops moving, will i get there in the end
sometimes it feels like I'm the only one who knows
and the look on your face it shows, disappointment again
it's just what goes on in my head

trying to hold back the anger the sadness and tears
it's a comfort sometimes they been holding my hand now for years
laugh without smiling when you need to fit in with the crowd
get out when its getting to loud, eyes on the exit instead
it's just what goes on in my head

life's better than nothing when nothing is all that you got
some shelter from the storm, it's not to much to ask is it not
have i turned away, from a neighbour in need
who committed some terrible deed, cos of something i said
the things that go on in my head

What Goes On

We are Netta&McGill and consist of Nettamoon and Jim McGill based in Norway and Australia - an independent songwriter duo. We celebrate music in it’s simplicity, and tell stories of friendship, love and longing. We are blessed to be two of the same mind, and want our music to be created with no fuss and no fences. 

Thank you for listening!

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