Disquiet Junto Project 0545: Unself-Awareness
The Assignment: Learn from feedback intended for others.

Step 1: This project builds on the previous one, but you needn’t have participated in project 0544 to do 0545. In project 0544, participants posted tracks for which they wanted feedback from other participants. Familiarize yourself with the discussion here:

https://llllllll.co/t/disquiet-junto-project-0544-feedback-loop/

Step 2: Pay particular attention to the feedback provided in the comments as the discussion thread proceeds.

Step 3: Choose one bit of feedback, and think about how you might apply it to your own music.

Step 4: Create or make a new track that benefits from what you learned in Step 3.

Step 5: Consider providing feedback to other people’s tracks.

Note: The Lines BBS runs on a discussion platform called Discourse, which has some built-in restrictions. Among these is that you can’t reply too many times to the same thread before someone else replies first. This is a “consecutive replies” matter. The best practice is to compile feedback to multiple tracks, and to tag reach recipient in one reply. If those instructions aren’t clear, just wait a little while after tracks begin to appear on the thread. Soon enough you’ll see examples of people doing exactly this.

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Deadline: This project’s deadline is the end of the day Monday, June 13, 2022, at 11:59pm (that is, just before midnight) wherever you are. It was posted on Thursday, June 9, 2022.

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Details: disquiet.com/0545

Disquiet Junto Project 0545: Unself-Awareness

A drone sequence with various sounds entering & exiting to create changing patterns, uploaded in response to comments about sounds coming in at different times.

Exits & Entrances (disquiet0545)

the feedback sentence, which i found remarkable:
"Don’t think it “needs” anything else"(Daniel Diaz to track from lazenbeeindustries)

the trio: dfam, mother 32, subharmonicum

When the flood comes(disquiet0545)

Samples https://soundcloud.com/user-467414884/butter-boil-beach-disquiet0544More on this 545th weekly Disquiet Junto project — Unself-Awareness (The Assignment: Learn from feedback intended for others) — at: https://disquiet.com/0545/

More on the Disquiet Junto at: https://disquiet.com/junto/

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Project discussion takes place on llllllll.co: https://llllllll.co/t/disquiet-junto-project-0545-unself-awareness/

Low Country Twat (disquiet0545)

Same last week's master reworked and remixed, with great feedback from friends and colleagues (see post here: https://llllllll.co/t/disquiet-junto-project-0545-unself-awareness/56084/11?u=dede)

Original track here:
https://soundcloud.com/daniel-diaz/time-lapse

I did not completely delete and rework from the ground, (considered it as a pretty
I introduced some variation in the new 8 bar sections, dropping tracks completely sometimes for more clarity 
I tried to make a less confusing mix, something that bothered me from the original, albeit keeping the generous amount of melodic-rhythmic stuff)
I tweaked some timing between bass and arp, and added 36 extra seconds, tried to give more focus on the bass and kick that I edited and remixed drastically

and most notably I added some Krautrock drums.

Thanks ffsanton, lazenbeeindustries, Hugh_G_Twatt, gis_sweden, krakenkraft, RPLKTR, fakeg3nius, Glitcher, howthenightcame and blisterpop.
Thanks Mark @disquiet for the wonderful thread.

Time Lapse (Vers.  Motorik) disquiet0545

Abstract Sound Structures, Musique Concrète & Live Electronics.
Experimental abstract animation videos.
It is my aim to create and/or edit my tracks & videos using free or open-source software only.
Influences include: J.S. Bach, John Cage, Iannis Xenakis, Giacinto Scelsi, Mauricio Kagel, Conlon Nancarrow, Christian Wolff, Harry Partch, Luc Ferrari, Morton Feldman, Cornelius Cardew, Bernard Parmegiani, Ana-Maria Avram, David Tudor, Alvin Lucier, Pauline Oliveros, Renaissance Polyphony.
All my work is published under a Creative Commons licence & can be freely downloaded (as wav) or remixed.

Exits & Entrances (disquiet0545)

ray_cobley