Keep it coming! ;-) Very nice tune, writing & soul. Raw guitar & no post editing gives a different atmosphere as if i am really there with you listening, beautiful voice!

Good songwriting. The melody and acoustic guitar are pretty good.

excuse me do you hear me, I cant hear me. love me, big UPs^__0- homie

thank for all the support it really makes a difference ❤️wishing you all the best

Robert, your song touches me with its melancholic honesty and minimalist arrangement.

Robert W Orpin: Clown without a smile (tke1 demo)
recorded via ableton live
condenser microphone -acoustic guitar,acoustic Bass,Voice
Please listen share thank you:)
Feedback welcome:)

Lyrics:

   Clown without a smile

It Keeps coming
Rain keep falling down
It Keeps coming
The applause has died away
A clown without  a smile
Such a sad thing to see...

It keeps coming 
A Sorrow that slowly drowns
It keeps coming
Love has gone away
Watching a clown without a smile
Is  a pathetic place to be..

The people are laughing
Not with  you 
But at you 
A fall from the wire
Brings the greatest applause. 
They shot the white horses
When they should've  shot the clown 
Oh  please put him out of his misery
He bringing the whole place down.

It Keeps coming
Tears keep falling down
It Keeps coming
Wipe the grease paint away
A clown without  a smile
Such a sad thing to see...

It keeps coming 
A Sorrow that slowly drowns
It keeps coming
Love has gone away
Watching a clown without a smile
It such a pathetic place to be..
Girl on the wire
Fell into the arms
Of the strongman
A broken figure sits alone 
The Crowd murmers obscenities 
A clown without a smile 
Such a sad thing to see
(I can't help thinking)
That clown looks alot like me.

It Keeps coming
Rain keep falling down
It Keeps coming
The  whispers have died away
A clown without  a smile
Such a sad thing to see...
It keeps coming 
A Sadness  that slowly drowns
It keeps coming
Love has gone away
A clown without a smile
Is a lonely way to be...

(ORPIN2025)


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