Beauuuuuuutiful! So  envelopping! Bravo Scott!

very nice folk song, sung very sensitively

very nice story, vocals and guitar playing

Wistful vibe..great delivery, and genuine lyrics..Liked the harmonizing on the 2nd Verse..Great job.

Nice songwriting and a pleasantly slow pace.

This is not just telling the fairy taile this is THE FAIRY TALE!

Once upon a time used to fit. I let it end, you never quit.
All those dreams laid out on the floor. It’s not a fairy-tale anymore. 

You were sure I was your prince. I could have been if I had any sense.
I’m the one, I closed that door. It’s not a fairy-tale anymore.

We might have been late on the rent once or twice, but you were never truly in distress.
The dragons I slayed were more like mice, and I was a frog – I was a frog –
Yes, I was a frog even after the kiss.

INSTRUMENTAL

I know you believed in me. I’d swim the moat. I’d set you free.
I’d not stop. I’d try some more. It’s not a fairy-tale anymore. 

Everyone knows how a fairy tale goes, the ending is happy, not sad.
You thought that you had your knight on a steed, but I was a frog – I was a frog - 
Yes, I was a frog even after the kiss.

There were no dragons to slay – maybe there were, but I walked away.
I know you never kept score, but it’s not a fairy-tale anymore.

Fairy Tale

Retired the beginning of 2023. Been writing music seriously for about six years. Thanks for listening - and sharing!

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