This could so easily be a soundtrack for a Nintendo 64 game. Very playful, very cool. :)

Very cyberpunk feel to the music. And an evocative message in the lyrics. Nice work, my friend.

Striking lyric, vocal and musical sound...well produced and expressed//wow!!

Factory

4:30 and I open my eyes
Tie my boots and they hit the ground 
As we sleep at night they keep the fire burning
Everybody wants to gather ‘round 
Everybody wants to lend a hand 
Everybody set to dig the ground
In the schools the children are learning
Everybody feels so civically proud 

When I woke up it didn’t look like the future
Same old bodies with the typical dumbed down heads
Close up the factory and all of the workers
Banned together to unseat the hand that fed
In the furnaces there’s metal that’s melting
Poured and shaped and forged to fit our plans
Politicians speak the people applauding 
They hide a knife behind their back and shake your hand

All along I thought I’d make a difference
When I was young, thought I could change The World
Over time I walked impossible distance 
Through the years set out to break my will 
Everybody wants to build a life
Hell bent it seems to take us down
Can we count on you to join the fight?
Can we count on you to make some sound?

When I collapsed I had a wondrous vision
Different bodies with new thoughts to share instead
Close up the factory and all of the workers
Came together to defeat the droning heads
In the furnaces there’s metal that’s melting
Poured and shaped and forged to fit our plans
Politicians speak the people applauding 
They hide a knife behind their back and shake your hand

When I woke up it didn’t look like the future
Same old bodies with the typical dumbed down heads
Close up the factory and all of the workers
Banned together to unseat the hand that fed
In the furnaces there’s metal that’s melting
Poured and shaped and forged to fit our plans
Politicians speak the people applauding 
They hide a knife behind their back and shake your hand

Factory

Songwriter based in Chicago, Illinois.  Contact via email simplecircuitsmusic@yahoo.com or PM.  Thanks for your kind feedback!


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