Goose bumping, most as I understand words !!

I read through the words before I listened..strong and powerful words describing a time that was, most probably, very difficult…you can certainly feel the sadness in your delivery here…even in another language (which I love hearing you speak, btw)…great piece, sKin..and I hope your next Spanish piece will have a different range of emotions…because, as you know, all emotions are important and powerful :)

Very emotional and beautiful expression, words are so strong

So dark. The deepest ground of a soul... and it's spoken in Spanish. That's good.

Puedo posiblemente ayudarte diciéndote que es magníficamente profundo, como siempre...

Really dark and creeps under your skin! Nice captured sKin!

Really nice to hear you speak spanish!! and the lyrics are great!!




Please forgive my poor Spanish skills, it has been a long time since I have used it; I could go on but I will leave it at this.

This one started when the word "ayúdame" randomly popped into my head, the rest followed soon after. It was during a recent dark period in my life. I had planned on posting my first Spanish work with much "nicer" words but those are more difficult and I need help with them.

The perfect photo was copyright protected so...

English is below.

ayúdame
estoy aquí abajo
no puedo ver el cielo
ayúdame
no quiero seguir así
por favor ayúdame 
¿quién tiene el poder?
¿dónde está la fuerza?
socorro
he caído otra vez
hasta el suelo
estoy roto
dentro el cárcel
esta celda oscura
cerrado
¿puedes oírme?
llorando
detrás estas paredes 
¿puedes ayudarme?

help me
I am here below
I can’t see the sky
help me
I don’t want to continue like this
please help me
who has the power?
where is the strength?
help! (more urgent form in Spanish)
I have fallen again
to the ground
I am broken
inside this dark cell
can you hear me?
crying
behind these walls
can you help me?



















Ayúdame-Help Me (Please see description)

I hope you feel it, I hope you feel yourself...

Lets collaborate! Words are powerful but music takes them to a whole other dimension. I'd really like to combine words and music. Please message me if you would like to work together. I can share works or write new ones based on others' ideas. I invite others to read my works as well. 

 


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