This is high level composing! Very goo harmony both instrumentally and vocally.

This track capture the mood of the lyrics so well. Very smoothly done.

Awesome track, guys! Great vocals delivery and lyrics, conveying the song's atmosphere.

I like the tempo of this song. Nice melodies and arrangements. Cool!

awesome song exceptional songwriting and composition skills

I love the chords progression. Beatles feeling in the voice. The verse are great and i think this is why you got sticked to it.  I would have loved also a real chorus with bright new chords to bring the song to another level. Still great song. congrats

Just one of my favorite bands for all they do…poetic, majestic, and warm

Slow day.
The holes in the clouds makes the 
dream fade.
The pills will not solve it.
No weekday.
Can ever replace the way friday. 
Can transform your world.
Oh, there's a girl.
A pain in your rib cage.
Is all.

Mind-frame.
Is not looking upwards in cold space.
Unravelling as you freeze in place.
The clock keeps on ticking.
You're blown away.
Out from the whirl.
Oh, there's a girl. a millstone you carry is all.

A down day.
Not looking outward but in.
Waste on the table is blown away. 
Can't make the connection between states.
Put on your act.
For the girl. 
She's all you have left in this world.

Oh, a fugue state.
Another enchantment is laid to waste.
Stare in the mirror.
Confused face,
Staring back outwardly fine.
What's mine is mine.
And the girl?
Becomes all-encompassing.




Slow Day

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