Excellent vocals, guitar, and overall feel. This solo works great with the rhythm.

Just had to have another couple of spins of this gorgeous song while on your cloud.......

Loving this music man... Feeling like a hug from nature

Hi Steve, just magnificent, calm like at the water's edge, a lake, peaceful and happy !

About the pages that go missing in our stories. 

VERSE 1
He dreamt a child’s dream
Of candy floss and cream 
Echoes call his name 
But no body’s there…any more 
Faces blurred away
Words he will not say… 

VERSE 2 
Sitting in the shade 
Where the oak once grew 
The leaves whisper low 
Of moments he once knew
But time it steals the light 
The dusk it falls too soon.  

CHORUS 
Pages torn away 
Words he can’t recall 
Memories that betray 
Faces far away 

VERSE 3
He holds a picture close
Its corners bent and frayed 
The faces blur with time
But their smiles have stayed
Names begin to fade, but 
The sense of warmth remains.

A Child's Dream

I like Soundcloud because it's a friendly community for sharing our music. When I comment on a track, I like to say something about how you wrote, performed or produced it. I have musically diverse interests: pop/rock, jazz-rock fusion, prog & alternative rock, blues, classical and neoclassical, to mention some. Main instrument is guitar; I'm not a keyboard player or singer, but hopefully I can do enough there to make my work sound ok.

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