Supreme songwriting here Elliot! You got it bro! Great guitar work and vocals! 👏👏👏

This is wonderful work! It may not show, but guitar is my primary inst. and you've really done a great job with these tracks.

Excellent! Just said on the Neon Giraffe track your song would fit well with electric guitar and here they are!

Love this- really nice chord progression- sounds like james bay 😀

every element has its' own place in the song and they all fit together effortlessly, really good composition and mixing/ mastering 👍

[Verse 1]
I guess I never mentioned all that bullshit
And thought I never would 'cause "that's not worth it"
But every now and then I think about these days
When I was just a kid and you were 'bout my age

[Verse 2]
We lived in other place with nothing but ourselves
The playground in the back was something that I hated and
I don't remember much, but know that I was scared
I hid under the bed to pretend I'm somewhere else

[Chorus]
I used to
Hold my breath
To not soak in that
And I prayed for life
Where there's hope sometime
For me

[Verse 3]
And both of you I blame, but somehow I can't hate
Still can't believe that you were younger than I am
But every hit she got was causing me more pain
You made me think that I'm deranged

[Chorus]
And I would
Hold my breath
To not soak in that
God I prayed for life
Where there's hope sometime for me oh

[Bridge]
There'll be hope sometime for me
(Hope sometime for me)
(Hope sometime for me)
There'll be hope sometime
(Hope sometime for me)
There'll be hope sometime
(Hope sometime for me)
There'll be hope sometime
(Hold my breath)
There'll be hope sometime
(To not soak in that)
There'll be hope sometime
(And I prayed for life)
There'll be hope sometime
(Hope sometime for me)
There'll be hope sometime
(Hold my breath)
There'll be hope sometime
(To not soak in that)
There'll be hope sometime
(And I prayed for life)
There'll be hope sometime

[Outro]
There'll be hope sometime for me
There'll be hope sometime for me
There'll be hope sometime

Lo-FI Affection

Stupid Fucking Playground

It all actually started when I was a kid y'know. I was living in that small town and all. Everyone was planting carrots there and had fun with it. I didn’t want to plant no carrot so I started making music.
So here I am in my 20’s with my 20 listeners...
I'm doing just fine.

Have you listened to Idyll? That EP is chill AF. I like it 'cause I haven't spent a penny on it, but then there's Tender Funk man...
I paid for the trumpets and the choir and thank god my boys from "the band" ain't getting shit out of it 'cause I would be even more broke than I am.
So if you're asking me if this whole music thing is worth it, I'ma tell you boy it's not an "Idyll" ha ha. (Damn I'm funny)

Anyway, if you're still reading this go on and listen to Stupid Fucking Playground I'm getting kinda emotional on that one, so you can read the lyrics and then text me on IG to check out if I'm good...
I got other songs too, like Benefit Friend or Second Choice - DEMO folks like them because people like to listen about other people having sex... you pervs.

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