Coul I like it's swing a lot.  Thanks for sharing .

I enjoyed the catchy guitar rhythm and chord progression. I did not expect some punk spirit in the vocals and an extended solo

Nice vocals, good energy, efficient chorus

Bray & the Astral Projections 

 

Wasted Again 

 

Verse 1: 

When we pass, the small details  

Misplaced or erased 

Shall we live with this spirit 

Can we live in disgrace 

 

Verse 2: 

Around the door, how we live (will matter) 

Our lessons are not futile  

Only remnants of dreams (all scattered) 

Your remains in a pile 

 

Chorus: 

Wasted Again 

Like time to the sand 

Every breath that we take, it could be our last 

 

Verse 3: 

Mercy bestowed upon those (who learned) 

And yearn for knowledge greater (than thyself) 

Shall we move toward the shadow 

Shall we remain in the past 

 

Verse 4: 

How long will it last 

Till our return to the sea 

To rebirth, to dreams, to karma, we grow 

To dust, to ashes, to the wind, we all go  

 

Chorus: 

Wasted Again 

Like time to the sand 

Every breath that we take, it could be our last

Wasted Again

LoFi Americana with a dash of Indie Alt Rock and Country 

Jeremy Brizzi is a songwriter and musician.  “I do what I can, with what I have, to show you how I feel.  Thanks for listening.”

With more than 300 song left to record and a constant attention to creation, the best is yet to come!  

https://jeremybrizzi.bandcamp.com

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