Name: Semi-Final Draft by Lazy Eyelids
Duration: 4 min 11 s
Description: Feels like the bass is clipping a bit, I'll make a few more changes probably.

The bass feels a bit too overpowering, but the mix sounds good! Some light reverb on the drums would probably sound good.  I could totally see vocals going in this too.  Good work!

nice composition, dig the drum programming too dude

guitar fills up the mix a bit too much but i like the drums and the clean guitar, nice

The drums are definitely my favourite part of this track, they feel really live and tight, if you programmed them you did a really good getting them to sound like that

you're a pretty good drummer. Don't necessarily care for post-rock but I can appreciate when somebody does what they do well. Good job.

Feels like the bass is clipping a bit, I'll make a few more changes probably.

Semi-Final Draft

Online Music_Guy

Determined Collapse

deeprest - zombie

CREDITS :
𖤐 PRODUCTION ► https://beatstars.com/erlax
𖤐 ENGINEERING ► https://jayremi.com

LINKS :
𖤐 SPOTIFY ▼
open.spotify.com/artist/5L0qqDu4PETBdsWrNKX9zO
𖤐 YOUTUBE ▼
youtube.com/@realdeeprest
𖤐 APPLE MUSIC ▼
music.apple.com/us/artist/deeprest/1562076584
𖤐 INSTAGRAM ▼
instagram.com/realdeeprest
𖤐 TWITTER ▼
twitter.com/realdeeprest

LYRICS:
Am I alive? 
I think not 
I just get high
And smoke way too much pot
I just sing songs
Cuz it's all that I got
I wanna die 
Instead I'll just rot
I hate my life
I ain't got no shot
Ain't got no shot
Never fucking had one
Ain't got no shot
Ain't got no handgun
I'mma pretty boy
I'm told I'm handsome 

It don't get me much
It don't change my luck
My life still rough like yours
I fight, and fuck, and more
I hurt, I love, I bleed, I pour
My thoughts are splattering so much gore
So I hate leaving my home, my doors

Please tell me that you feeling me
You wanna hear more?
Do you wanna?

Im boutta freak out 
I think that I'm lost
I forgot 
What I'm here for
The things that I love
What the fuck do I stand for?
I don't know 
I got a head full of lies
And a heart full of snow
x2

I got a heart full of snow
I got snowflakes in my pocket
I got frostbite long ago
Now I just don't feel nothing
Please don't ever ask me to trust you 
Cuz I ain't trusting shit
Played so many games, trust me I'm so done with it

Am I alive? 
I think that I'm not 
I just get really high
And I smoke way too much pot
I just sing my silly songs
Cuz it's all that I got
I for real wanna die 
But instead I'll just rot

Am I alive
I think not 
I get high
I smoke pot
I sing songs
It's all I got
I wanna die 
Instead I'll rot

scarlettblossom

zombie

zombie (prod. ERLAX)

Lyrics:
CQ CQ CQ
This is Whiskey November Seven November
Whiskey November Seven November
Standing by

CQ calling in the middle of the night
Skips and hops if the conditions are right
Adjusting the squelch on my TYT
Silent noise nightmare…
Or a DX dream?
QRZ
QRA
Propagation game

Begin Transmission!
QRO
QRP
QRS
QRT

In the static
A signal is sung
Fading voices
Like ghosts they haunt

CW dits and dahs
Such a pity I never learned morse code
...---...

End of Transmission!
Gatekeepers and angry old men
Maybe I should switch to the citizens band

Idahome

Esoteric Transmission

This is literally the most perfect shit i've ever made and i made it in 1 hour, very lovely
Anything is by me except drums as always but still this turned out good hope you listen before i kill myself like Ian 

Semi-Final Draft

Lazy Eyelids

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