What a splendid song , really creative, thanks a lot for sharing

pleasantly surprised by the melodies, nice job [via https://sc.repostexchange.com]

Excellent song. A great intro and when the drums step in it starts together with the lyrics to a real good song. Like the way how it develops. I guess your influences come from somewhere like "The National" which the song reminds me of

Love the buildup in the intro!!  Sets the rhythm up really well.  Good vocal! Well done!!

Really liked the melody/voice/lyrics/drums

The intro grabs you. The lyrics and mood of the song are dark but inviting. Great vocal! 👏👏

very beautiful song, relaxing music with your voice, very beautiful lyrics I like it ""

There's a spark in the dark
A rhythm released from its toil at last tonight
The light is so stark
Is it the torch or a heavenly gleam that's so bright?

Well maybe it’s right
The blood in my mouth and over my hands is only mine
And maybe the light 
Is just the stars and the moon that won't align

St. Peter, he hid the keys tonight
And I know, I know

The city lights won't gleam for me
Not a star in the sky will shine for me
And I won't see you
I can see you up high, though I clipped your wings
You can't drag me up with pulleys or strings
But you won't, if you could

I think of you
By the lake that night, your shadow's cast was so bright
And I curse myself
And the folly of man when I took your hand too tight

And the serpent has a bed for me
And I know, I know

That I'm the villain in my own story
A beast in chains who doesn't find glory
And it's what I deserve
I see the mare tonight with the blood in its fur
Black eyes bulged out and then it turns to her
And I can't look away

The hour is soon to come
I see the veil stretched thin
I think of your rosy lips
And your alabaster skin

The waves break sudden and I'm under them
They drag me down and pull at my skin
And then I see them
All of the souls that I've thrown to waste
The bitter sting of their lives debased
I can't close my eyes
I see you again among the fading lights
In the faces of them on those cold dark nights
And I cannot breath
Maybe I'll see you again in my next life
Or maybe it's you holding up the knife
And then all is dark

Maybe there's no god's design
Maybe there's no god's design
Maybe there's no god's design
Maybe there's no god's design

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