I liked the storytelling in your song. A psychedelic folk tune, loved it. Just wished that the chorus was stronger (more guitar or effects...). Not bad, just constructive criticism! Good work.

Good quality arrangement and production as always. Great vocal (and harmonies)! You and Paul McCartney would have a great jam together!

Nice song! Sounds like the 70th! Great job!

wonderful creative song with great vibes !!

This is SO good! Great lyrics in total harmony with beautiful music.

Quite different to your normal. It almost has an African feel in the intro - for some reason it reminded me a bit of Johnny Clegg and Juluka a bit - check his stuff out if you like. Well done

Many thanks to my Bandlab friends. Only lead voice and melody is from me plus lyrics. 

Eddie Q - My Girl.

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Without Your Love

Vocal : Magdalena Meisel
Music : Magdalena Meisel
Arrangement and Instrumentation: Michael Heavner
Lyrics Without Your Love © Tina Neumann (BMI ISSA SONGWRITER)

Without Your Love

HOCU$ POCU$ (MADDEN)

Lyrics:
So, you got it all figured out
and look to feel for me who dont

is there room for me in your happy place
as your concern seem to suggest
          
`dont bother with the sympathy
I just want a free ride for Gods and old times sake
dont bother with the sympathy
I just want a free ride for Gods and old times sake

back then, our blood-promise, remember?
a sacred oath we swore to never dishonor
you, the pristine, me seen more as a pretender 
you were the pristine  I was the shady pretender

Im sure you`d like to say a thing or two
its in vain, but you always do

And I guess I could try to be a man of my words
but then again, that just wouldnt be me

rather than keep ranting at me
uphold your oath from that night, for gods and old times sake
rather than enlightening me
be a provider tonight, for gods and old times sake

if delt my hand, you were to play my game. 
what would make you choose different?
food for your mind, until you lecture next time
see; its not a choice, we came here by design

Pristine and the Pretender

Pristine And The Pretender

Escape

Lyrics to the song: Awakening good feelings, fighting is part of life, and seeing the best of you. Cherish the bad and good times, if you think about giving up, think again! you are capable! Believe in yourself.

Real dreams, who believes what they point to?
I dreamed that I was better than today, maybe I am or not, but I live in peace.

Along the road of this life I reinvented myself, changing plans and moving away from the disguised ones.. Ah! How I got it right. I'm stronger now, I put pieces of myself together and remade my story, that's life.

Real dreams, who believes for what they achieve, I dreamed that I was better than today, maybe I am or not, but I live in peace.

Real dreams

A remaster of the original from 2022.

LYRICS

There was a man.
Who sailed to sea.
What the fuck? he could be anybody.
He could be me.
But I'm not he.

Oh, there's a place.
Where i could go.
I'm just making sure that you're the one who knows.
I'll never, though.
Unless i'm shown.

Oh, there's a land.
Not far away.
They keep a watch over the things you do and say.
Oh, they know.
So you stay.

In your mind,
You hide away.
They say you're better off with devil's than to pray.
The ones you know.
Are here to stay.

Over hills, across the oceans 
Ever westward, pushing on.
Over feilds and through the forest.
Ever westward, pushing on.
Over hills, across the mountains 
Ever westward, pushing on.
Over wasteland over desert.
Ever westward, pushing on.
Over frozen waste and tundra.
Ever westward, pushing on.
Over hills, across the oceans.
Ever westward, pushing on.

Here they come.
From the east.
Taking over, but they're doing it in peace.
Unleash the beast.
Cut loose the leash.

You see the hill,
You look around,
You see, you're floating on the earth that's spinning round.
You feel the ground.
The world goes round.

No one's in charge
No one can be.
When each and every  one of us is free.
You are not me.
Could never be.

Forget it all.
Forget the sun.
The day is done.
But you don't have to tell no one.
Here they come.

Oh, look, the stars.
That one there is procyon.
It shines like the tip of a diamond in the winter sky.
Just over there.
the red top of orion.
That means that it's cold and the end could be nigh.
The bottom is propped up.
By the bright shining dog star.
Sending people mad.
Making other folk glad.
And boring into your minds eye.

They rise in the east.
And they go somewhere that way.
But one these nights, there'll no longer be light.
When they end for you personally.

A spade is a spade,
And a shovels a shovel,
A stars just a point of light in the sky.



Star Song

just how you confused about your wife, when she compares you with her jobs, her money, 
this is true story from my friend. 
#world #Rock #Girls

Star Song

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