this fire but you should've taken a slower more melow take

I'd say remake this it could be a hit get rid of the distorted voice at the beginning and open with some hard felt rap into the chorus then in the middle stay mellow into the final chorus of course switch it up a bit in the middle but this this could be a classic

[PROD. CPO3]
Oxygen
I’m not alright, I see you by my side
I breathe, breathe in your light
Now I, I feel alive
You are
You are my oxygen 
You are my oxygen 

I’m not alright, I see you by my side
I breathe, breathe in your light
Now I, I feel alive
You are
You are my oxygen 
You are my oxygen 

You my oxygen
I need you to live, but I don’t need you to live here 
If you my only problem then I wish they would disappear 
I said I’d love you til the end, looks like it’s getting near
I’m tired of yelling, I’m tired of fighting 
And every word I’m writing has me closer and closer to crying 
The bond we had cannot be restored
And I can’t give anymore 
How much of my soul must I pour out
Just to receive nothing back
My heart bleeds for you to come back

You blame me for your problems and everything that happens, no matter if I would have done that
Stop asking for that love back, it’s non-existent 
You claim I’m not talking or being distant 
I finally found out that I’m gifted
And the pain I went through I’ll never have to relive it
Things are different
Recollecting parts of me I thought we were missing
I can’t play this game forever I already tried forgiving 

I want to know 
I want to know 
Why?
Did it have to come to this?
Because youre selfish 

You’re selfish, my feelings do not matter to you and apparently nobody else
So In that case, why would I not prioritize my myself
Is it possible your experiences won’t match with mine?
Is it possible, everything you say is underneath Father Time?
The things I’d do for you, I’m always down to face time.
I faced all your demons for you, so why couldn’t you face mine 

I’m not alright, I see you by my side
I breathe, breathe in your light
Now I, I feel alive
You are
You are my oxygen 
You are my oxygen 

I’m not alright, I see you by my side
I breathe, breathe in your light
Now I, I feel alive
You are
You are my oxygen 
You are my oxygen

DISINTEGRVTE PT.2 (FEAT. LUISPRODUCEDIT) [PROD. NOODLEZ]

LYRICS : 

lookin for a lost soul,
threw that shit away
i forgot that shit a time ago,
left and ran away
i’m stranded from my own home
staying in my lane
might as well see me in grave 
bitch you put me in a lake

drowning all my thoughts down
all my fuckin thoughts down
hated by my whole town
what to fuckin do now
drowning all my thoughts down
all my fuckin thoughts down
hated by my whole town
what to fuckin do now

AND I
FEEL ALIVE
GREW MY HORNS, 
BLOODY EYES,
CORRUPTION EYESIGHT
BLACKED OUT SUNLIGHT
REAL EYES, REALIZE, 
REAL LIES, BULLSHIT
DEMONIC TOWN
STARTED DOIN SHIT TO FIT IN

WANNA RIP MY GUTS OUT
WANNA RIP MY GUTS OUT
SCREAMING MAKING NO SOUND
ALL OF YOU HAVE NO SOUND
WANNA RIP MY GUTS OUT
WANNA RIP MY GUTS OUT
SCREAMING MAKING NO SOUND
ALL OF YOU HAVE NO SOUND

i just wanna be alive, be alive
i just wanna be alive, be alive
i just wanna be alive, be alive
i just wanna be alive, be alive

lookin for a lost soul,
threw that shit away
i forgot that shit a time ago,
left and ran away

(i just wanna be alive, be alive)

i’m stranded from my own home
staying in my lane
might as well see me in grave 
bitch you put me in a lake

(i just wanna be alive, be alive)

drowning all my thoughts down
all my fuckin thoughts down
hated by my whole town
what to fuckin do now

(i just wanna be alive, be alive)

drowning all my thoughts down
all my fuckin thoughts down
hated by my whole town
what to fuckin do now

(i just wanna be alive, be alive)


[ART, LYRICS AND VOCALS  BY SEVVERYRARE]

EVO [PROD. DIEDINOCTOBER X TAKIZAVA]

based; [in] NY!!![prod.6makxs]

BLATANT W/ T8 W1LL [PROD. INFFABE]

NIGHTCRAWLER*+ [deadinparis] *catalyst.5

iwantyousobad/thereforyou (@gudaa + @michael Harrison + @drmabeats)

Its early autumn and i'm still up never got out of bed i thought id had enough but
Every morning you call my phone, just to make sure i'm not alone
get its out of pity but i can't help feeling like its real but really i cant tell
hurts to know you like me as a friend, but it's not like im losing you its not the end

You make me feel like shit for having all these feelings,
Is it really worth all this pain that i am bleeding

i fall for you and on the way down i catch a glimpse of the leaves on the ground
So picked one out, a gorgeous gold brown, i thought of you right before i got shot down

The things in life aren't fair
I feel like i'm not there

Ya making me lose my mind again, take vicodin, not listening
I will not believe your lies again, it's not play pretend, could this be the end?

You make me feel like shit for having all these feelings,
Is it really worth all this pain that i am bleeding

i fall for you and on the way down i catch a glimpse of the leaves on the ground
So picked one out, a gorgeous gold brown, i thought of you right before i got shot down
fall for you and on the way down i catch a glimpse of the leaves on the ground
So picked one out, a gorgeous gold brown, i thought of you right before i got shot down

The things in life aren't fair
I feel like i'm not there

O2

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