what a great melody - great voice - the lyrics are really good and speak to me from the heart

wow, the guitar work is outstanding. Judging from the loveliness of the song, not much can have gone wrong after all 😅🌎❤️

Really great writing and performance Dom, as usual

Hey Dom this is a fine song.  Good writing, mix is tight, and especially love the vocal arangement.

I like how your rock sound has just a touch of raw punk to it.  This is fun.

Your Mix 5

I don t care - Apocalyptica

Honorable Mentions:
Chris Lane Sr - Bass Guitar
Lauren Nolan - Title Suggestion

"What went wrong"

(Chorus)
Hey, Hey
What went wrong with the world tonight
I made not home alive - I'm so tired
Don't wanna fight

(Verse 1)
You win - I lose
We act like fools
Nothing changes 
From day to day
You Said you're right
I say goodnight
I get the feeling
We're seeing things differently

(Chorus)

(Verse 2)
Check In - Checked out
I'm inside out
All is quiet
On an endless stream of misery
Be one without
There is no doubt
My will is broken
But I ain't getting angry

(Bridge/Guitar Solo)

(Chorus)

What Went Wrong?

Last Child X For Revenge  Duka X Serana  Mashup  Lirik Video

Mellow MidSummer Evening

Here’s The Circle video:
https://youtu.be/upxfvLhJtQs

This song is about being stuck in an endless loop of working life, the realisation of never ending monotony, to finally working out how to handle it and the hope of escaping it.

Video on YouTube - https://youtu.be/upxfvLhJtQs

A big thank you to Pat Morey for the use of his house to record and for mixing this song. Also Gavin Smith for the use of his drums and equipment.

The Circle

Flames of Love       (c2023)

Ain’t We There Yet.         (c2023)

we read nursery rhymes to our kids every night..then we all go to sleep and wake up and seem to forget the stories morals.
sometimes the solution to complicated problems is easier than not..just get up and help.
the dangers of virtual reality/social media are becoming obvious to me..we lose touch with each other and the world and so lose empathy and the capacity to help.it generates a false sense of security and distorts reality.

lyrics

one day a stormy wind blew in the 100 acre wood
it blew Yore's house to the ground
he stood all alone in the cold cold rain
losing all hope with no place to go

piglet was trapped in a raging flood in the 100 acre wood
he stood on some chairs to save himself
but with no one around he feared he would drown

but Winnie the Pooh knew what to do
without even counting to one or to two
he put down his honey pot, got off of his couch 
and went outside to help

now our neighbors are homeless they lie in the street
in the cold cold rain ,no place to go
losing all hope
the children outside have no food to eat
they are lost and afraid ,full of fear and of pain

you sit on your couch with your earphones on
with your eyes glued to a screen
you are lost down a rabbit hole waiting to have 
your dinner delivered to your door

if Winnie the Pooh knew what to do
then tell me why don't you???

you think all is well and you're safe on your couch
you have virtual reality to hide in
but everything's fine until it's not
you're not alone in the world
when they pound down your door cause they can't take anymore
the fault will be yours not theirs

so take off the ear phones
get up off the couch
and go outside to help

if Winnie the Pooh knew what to do and he is just a bear
why can't you

after all Winnie the Pooh is stuffed with fluff
tell me what are you made of??

oh pooh. where are you?(#@)

Album onbekend (5-11-2023 10:53:43)

Hall Of The Dead

"Take aim at his heart now!" he yelled. "And shoot for the head!" shouted back his armed colleague. But with tears in the formers' eyes, he knew he had already lost the fight. The longer he wore on in the battle with his foe, the greater his uncertainty. 
This song is about a mercenary remembering an encounter with a fellow mercenary. They were both after the same target and the first, unarmed mercenary was forced to kill his armed colleague with a car.
Listening to the story of the song, one may get the sense that betrayal and regret are central themes; however, they are only one of the many threads unfurled in the song. Violence and mercy are more central, especially within the mind's eye of the protagonist re-living what had occurred on one fateful day.
A violent mind may not breed mercy, but mercy will never hold a place (or a candle, if you will) in the minds of those whose idea of violence is not honourable and just -- in a moral sense, of course. Moral compasses change direction from person to person, from time to time, and from situation to situation. They can even, sometimes, point to one's own fate -- mercifully or not.

LYRICS:
Somebody once told me
In a ripped-up rage
Had eyes like a monster, and it came
Like the wind against my head.
So Drive Like You Stole It
With nothing to say
Eyes runnin' like water, to this day
I could not relate.

Hearing slowed-down sounds
Of an engine roaring,
Wheels rollin' to a cliff's end
And shot out in escape.
So it seemed
Was a blow to my youth.

Somebody once told me
In a ripped-up rage
Had eyes like a monster, and it came
Like the wind against my head.
So Drive Like You Stole It
With nothing to say
Eyes runnin' like water, to this day
I could not relate.

Seeing moving parts
As it comes upon him,
Devoted locomotion
To bring about elimination.
What I've seen
I have created.

Somebody once told me
In a ripped-up rage
Had eyes like a monster, and it came
Like the wind against my head.
So Drive Like You Stole It
With nothing to say
Eyes runnin' like water, to this day
I could not relate.

Take aim at his heart now
And shoot for the head
A backstabber grieving his existence,
So tortured.
Hold up a candle
In a darkened cave
Canot fix what cannot be seen:
I refuse to replay.

Like You Stole It

Music video: https://youtu.be/1b84yHmjx3k

(In loving memory of the summer-2019)

My Summer

Groovy, comedy, humorous, saxophone, Donald trump, electronic

Synthetic Trousers (Donald where’s your itch gone)

Synthetic Trousers (Donald where’s your itch gone)-REFAFFED

Heavy Punk Rock 'n' Roll band turns into Synthwave nowadays! Brand NEW album "Ultraviolet Cosmos" available NOW!
https://shockthealgorithm.bandcamp.com/album/ultraviolet-cosmos

I'm a 53 year old "RockDad".   I’ve been playing guitar and playing in bands since 12 years old.  Pair that with an overactive imagination.  Another Singer/Songwriter is born.  Making music is a great way to blow off steam & a lot cheaper than therapy.   And lately bits the best way to meet like minded people & make new friends.  I have a private songwriting group on Facebook called Songwriters  Anonymous filled with some of the greatest musicians & songwriters to be found on the internet.  We’re all addicted as are you.  I look forward to hearing your stuff!   Peace

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