Such relatable words and sung from the heart. You got me reeled in by the truth of this. Some lovely picking too. Thanks Johnny

wow this is superb Johnny! Such great songwriting. And the way you sing and deliver these lyrics is so perfect. Wow.. I say it again.

Wonderful, moving lyrics and vocals! Gentle and beautiful guitar sounds, perfect work Jhonny!

A superb song Johnny..Great lyric and so well performed.. Love it...

Love this delicate song and some great picking there Johnny! Another lovely, well crafted song ……..

Love this lyric....only count to 9...brilliant

the most perfect big light I see ...with wide open eyes

the most perfect big light I see ...with wide open eyes (a song I wish I could have written ...really something so many need to hear, read for so many reasons. Been so busy fiding shadows in my own mind to search anyone's light. This is a wonderful breakout of the darkness Johnny...so powerfully simple and real

Have you ever been in a crowded Room and yet felt so totally alone. This song is about not being perfect, not being the best at anything and wishing a particular person that you really like and admire would just once see you. 
"See me"  is dedicated to all us Less than amazing people who are mostly invisible to the movers and shakers of todays high achieving societies, we   just want to be seen.
Written and performed by : Johnny Mc Farlane 2023   Lyrics below 


See Me 
 I’m not a perfect man in Anyway, I’m not 6 foot tall and I can’t play. 
Basketball or Baseball or football or any type of Ball 
In fact, I don’t pay any sport at all. 
I’m the star that broke the Camel’s back. 
I’m a boomerang that won’t come back. 
I’m a song that’s lost it Melody. 
I’m a symphony without a key.
I’m a raindrop that won’t leave the sky. 
I’m a teardrop that just won’t cry. 
I’m a stubborn mule that just won’t go. 
I’m a snowflake and I don’t want to Snow. 

Chorus 
But there’s a light that shines in everyone. 
Its there for all the world to see. 
Well, I found my light and its as bright as it can be. 
I don’t care about the world I only want you to see me, see me. 

I’m an Eagle who won’t hit the Sky.
I’m afraid of heights I don't want to fly.
I’m a star that just won’t shine. 
And I can only count to 9. 

I pass you every single day. 
You always look the other way. 
But I live and pray that maybe you’ll look my way. 

And I believe that there’s a light inside of everyone. 
Its there for all the world to see. 
Well, I found my light and its as bright as it can be. 
I don’t care about the world I only want you to see me, see me. 
To see me , To see me 

They say that sticks and stones will break your bones 
But Love will only break your heart 
Oh God how true this is , if only you could see 
If only you would look my way and see me 

Well  I believe that there’s a light inside of everyone. 
Its there for all the world to see. 
Well, I found my light and its as bright as it can be. 
I don’t care about the world I only want you to see me, see me. 
To see me , To see me

See Me

I am a singer/songwriter from Ireland loving SoundCloud and the ability to be able to put my songs up here for people to listen to and comment and to be able to collaborate with other musicians around the world is really amazing. Loving the technology that makes all this home recording and sharing possible and  i am totally knocked out by the talent out there it is frightening and brilliant and i am in awe and very happy to be part of this amazing forum.

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