First, I really dig your music, brotha. :) If you're interested, my opinion/critique is that I wish there was more dynamics and space in this track. I think the drums are burried in the mix, and it's making the track sound weak. What I mean by "space" is really just adding a little bit of reverb to the vocals. In my opinion, they sound very dry right now.

I enjoy your voice, or the signing on this track. 

so nice! kinda reminds me of the good old dahboard confessional songs

the bass sounds absolutely amazing and the song has a great production

From My Bedroom Window:

The stars are all falling along to the beat 
And I'm coming tumbling after
It's getting dark in here, too dark to see 
The room's turning faster, and faster it goes
I close my eyes and I'm already lost
As I turn to run the door comes to a close
I try to leave but exit is locked
I've swallowed the key
I've sealed myself in
The window was barred
But in that moment

I watched the sunrise
Over the October skyline
From my bedroom window
I saw skyscrapers outlined
Like a silhouette shadow
Against the rays of sunshine
From my prison window
Where I spend most of my time

The night sky is falling along to the beat 
And I'm coming tumbling after her
It's getting dark in here, too dark to sleep
The room's turning faster and faster
And faster, and faster it goes

I watched the sunrise
Over the October skyline
From my bedroom window
I saw skyscrapers outlined
Like a silhouette shadow
Against the rays of sunshine
From my prison window
Where I spend most of my time
Where I spend so much time

I sing along to the song that I hear
But here it's so eerily silent
Outside the picture is coming in clear
The colors so beautifully vibrant

Wash

From My Bedroom Window

I wish I could storm the beaches

Should I breathe
Should I wait until it hurts for when I leave
I know that joy won't last
And the summer will soon pass 
And the clouds will move in soon
And the sun becomes the moon

Do I wait until the flowers bloom
Or do I pluck them up to calm these moods
Wasps are buzzing through my skull
Let them turn me into human mulch

normandy

Blackout

early morning hallucination

Covalent

Common Man

Unwound:

Save your breath
I won't have you pitying me 
Bite your tongue
You insult me with your sympathy
I don't need your lectures
Or threats of leaving, 
Heaven forbid
Hold your tears
Your drama isn't welcome here
I tell you, "Let it be"
Instead you choose to persevere
Why don't you take a picture?
It'll last much longer than we ever did

How can you say that I'm the only one?
You pull my strings and watch me come undone
I'm lying on the ground
All unwound and out of love
I've had enough of you

Oh I’ve had enough of
You and your lies
I should cut you down to size
But I'll be the bigger man,
‘Cause I know you won't apologize
Say what's on your mind, 
But don't forget to think
Before you speak
Lose that tone
Before I lose my composure too
We should have known
This contention’s been long overdue
Let’s hash it out
Talking loudly always does the trick,
Wouldn't you agree?

How dare you say that I never cared
I didn’t mean to hurt you girl, I swear
But I won't let you walk away 
Until I say my fair share. 
Let's be clear
How can you say that I'm the only one?
You pull my strings and watch me come undone
I'm lying on the ground
All unwound and out of love
I've had enough of you

Unwound

How Does It Feel:

Excuse me, I guess it's just a dirty habit
I have a tendency of thinking too much about it
I've tried everything to keep you out
But I get so lonely when you're not around
Time flies faster when we're having fun
In one week I think we may have jumped the gun
You say you never saw this happening
Look in my eyes and tell me what you're thinking

You said you meant every word you spoke
But it hasn't felt the way it had before

So tell me baby how does it feel?
You made me think this was for real, oh yeah
If you don't need me let me go
But before I leave please let me know
Tell me baby, how does it feel?

I found out, it hit me like a ton of bricks
I never thought it ever would have come to this
I knew you once, but now it's just a passing glance
I want you back, but I know I can't take that chance
Goddamn, you really had a hold of me
I wish you never had let go of me
But I can't live this way
We're slipping out of reach

You said you meant every word you spoke
But it hasn't felt the way it had before

No part of me is proud of this
But seeing you happy makes me sick

So tell me baby how does it feel?
Tell me baby, how does it feel?
You made me think this was for real
Tell me, was this real?
If you don't need me let me go
But before I leave please let me know
Tell me baby, how does it feel?
How does it feel? 

When you lie awake at night
Do you think of me, even once in a while?
Or has your love really run its course?
Honey, I've been running back and forth
Over our top forty moments
'Cause you still haven't told me
Won't you let me know?
How does it feel?

How Does It Feel

Lead single from my upcoming EP, 2020-1.

crack the sky
it comes from on high
when the blast range hits
you can see it for miles

a desolate zone
no place to call home
so thank you Uncle Sam
for the country we roam

clean it all up
clean it all up
clean it all up
clean it all up

don't give a fuck
don't give a fuck
don't give a fuck
don't give a fuck

clean it all up
clean it all up

don't give a fuck about politicians that suck or when the shooter says duck so just tell me what's up

just tell me what's up

crack the ground
'til there isn't a sound
when the sun arises
you will never be found

crack the sky
it comes from on high
when the blast range hits
you can see it for miles

a desolate zone
no place to call home
so thank you Uncle Sam
for the country we roam

clean it all up
clean it all up
clean it all up
clean it all up

come alive and lead the way
right your wrongs and win the day
fight until your bones are bare
fight until your bones are bare
fight until your bones are bare
fight until your bones are bare

Fight Until Your Bones Are Bare

Lost in Translation:

You shot the messenger far too soon
So I will be the bearer of your bad news
I fear this is not what you wanted to hear
As we draw near to our unavoidable doom

So please won't you leave me behind?
One more soldier falls in line

You imagined where you'd never been
With best of intentions, that's where we chose to begin
Lost in translation, we're fading awake from this dream
All was perfection when nothing was all there could be
Lost in translation, we're fading away

So please won't you leave me behind?
One more noble sacrifice

Why would I deceive you?
Why would that please me?
All I desire you've given completely
All you've to offer I've already taken
What must I do to get you to believe me?
All I require is some explanation
Why would you lie to me, love me, and leave me?
Not all is forgotten
You make it sound easy
While deep down inside you
You know that you need me
Best of intentions are lost in translation
We're playing with fire at the edge of damnation
I can't absolve you, no not absolutely
Low and behold now there's nothing
Where something should be

Lost in Translation

Wish I Could:

I don’t need another reason
I’ve seen how this plays out before
And I can’t spend another trying year beside you here, 
If you can’t decide you need me anymore
You won’t let me leave without you
But you can’t bare to see me stay
Even though I thought that this time we might compromise,
I realize the choice is yours to make
I can’t make you think about me
I don’t expect you to relate
And even now I’d give myself if it would help,
Though I can’t give what you refuse to take

But I wish I could
And I wish you knew
That even though it’s almost over
Part of me will always be with you
I think that you know me
As well as anybody can
Hell, I don’t even know myself half as well,
But to hear you tell it helps me understand
You need me to focus,
To notice when it’s not about me
I’ve been trying hard to rule it out, 
But there’s no doubt
Our attention isn’t where it’s meant to be

And maybe there’s more to the story
But I don’t want to know how it ends
Give me another beginning
So we can start this over again
Please tell me how I can fix this
Let me try to be more than I am
You’ve tried to put all this behind you
You wish you could but you can’t

I wish we could leave this alone
But we won’t, and it’s wearing me thin
I wish I could let you go
But I wouldn’t know where to begin
I’d do anything to be what you need,
But you need me to be someone else
I wish you could see how hard
I try not to be myself

How Does It Feel

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