It's nice, but I think you could do with less repetition, as well as augmenting the ideas as the song progresses. More layers, different strumming patterns, vocal harmonies, dynamic shifts, etc.

Did I just step into the 90s? Lol, love the vocal mix. What's your setup like?

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Written by Angelo Badalamenti & David Lynch. Performed by Life Model.

Just You

Wilco by Yoñlu. Recording never heard before. Day was available September 1, 2011

Yonlu - Reservations (Wilco Song)

previously lost track [dat 24] Icbyd-merry maidens

today is valentine's day
everybody's holding hands
i try to hold my breath
until i drop

(originally written in 2011)
(off "A PROMISE" -- April 12th 2018)

A Promise

Simon Cameron Fletcher - Never Fall In Love

FAIRY

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あなたを忘れる魔法があれば-Yukiko Okada -Jaco

風の魔法で…Yukiko Okada -Jaco

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07 days turn to night

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"You're right, with me, being less than 25 years old, I've already made several hundred thousand dollars in bonds and investments and now being involved in several U.S. Senate campaigns as a strategist, I must be unbelievably jealous of you making cassettes and CDs as a whiny Canadian hikikomori."

"some nice feels here and there, but man this style (folk/indie i guess) of music is a dead and beat horse and it just doesn't really capture me and unless there is something very exceptional about it in its personality and style, and not to be a dick, but i just don't feel like you offer that here with these songs."

"I find your influences interesting because I see almost none of those songwriters in your music. They're all relatively famous (or well liked) for taking relatively simple songs to play and doing unusual things with them, or using uncommon original chord progressions...your music is very samesy and feels way, way too safe. You have an unorthodox voice you aren't trying to push in any one direction and music composed entirely of chords - you have to do something to distinguish yourself more than lyrics. Otherwise people might as well read poetry. Keep working on it for sure."

"your music is recorded on a goddamned laptop mic and there's not even any processing on it to make it sound any less shitty, you have absolutely no skill for singing, your lyrics are so basic they provide no insight and aren't intriguing in the least. nothing about your music is captivating in any way, in fact it's deliberately alienating... and you insist on posting the same selfies of your pasty baby face with every babbling defensive post you make...
you're the prime example of someone who should keep their day job"

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Simon Cameron Fletcher - Never Fall In Love

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