Gets a bit samey, could do with more instruments or perhaps to be a minute or two shorter - the vox and guitar are nice though

Progression is a tad simple but for this style it works.

really need a way to try and flesh this out a bit, good structure though, the foundation is there

your voice is too smooth man, it feels like you're molesting my ears with your smoothness

pop song

Written by Angelo Badalamenti & David Lynch. Performed by Life Model.

Just You

Wilco by Yoñlu. Recording never heard before. Day was available September 1, 2011

Yonlu - Reservations (Wilco Song)

previously lost track [dat 24] Icbyd-merry maidens

Let me tell you about the time
when I thought you were mine
The day I finally felt at ease
The day I finally felt fine
Sitting alone at Union Station
My brain racing, patiently waiting
Waiting to see your pretty face
Waiting for you to come to me

You made me feel happy
You make me feel complete
So won't you give me a chance
To be yours

I've lived a lifetime full of loneliness
You make me sad when you go
You make me feel like I'm worth it
My heart could have been your home
Well, here's a problem, can't you see?
I liked you better when you liked me
And now our friendship must end
'Cause you don't want to see me again

Look at you with your pretty blue eyes
Eyes full of happiness and innocence
still hear your magical voice in my head
Will you ever let me see you again?
Yes, I'm sure you'll return back to Whitby
And I'll pretend you didn't hurt me
I'll pretend it never happened
Eventually you'll forget about me

You made me feel happy
You made me feel complete
Why didn't you give me a chance to be yours

Yours

FAIRY

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05 walk with me to the forest

07 days turn to night

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"You're right, with me, being less than 25 years old, I've already made several hundred thousand dollars in bonds and investments and now being involved in several U.S. Senate campaigns as a strategist, I must be unbelievably jealous of you making cassettes and CDs as a whiny Canadian hikikomori."

"some nice feels here and there, but man this style (folk/indie i guess) of music is a dead and beat horse and it just doesn't really capture me and unless there is something very exceptional about it in its personality and style, and not to be a dick, but i just don't feel like you offer that here with these songs."

"I find your influences interesting because I see almost none of those songwriters in your music. They're all relatively famous (or well liked) for taking relatively simple songs to play and doing unusual things with them, or using uncommon original chord progressions...your music is very samesy and feels way, way too safe. You have an unorthodox voice you aren't trying to push in any one direction and music composed entirely of chords - you have to do something to distinguish yourself more than lyrics. Otherwise people might as well read poetry. Keep working on it for sure."

"your music is recorded on a goddamned laptop mic and there's not even any processing on it to make it sound any less shitty, you have absolutely no skill for singing, your lyrics are so basic they provide no insight and aren't intriguing in the least. nothing about your music is captivating in any way, in fact it's deliberately alienating... and you insist on posting the same selfies of your pasty baby face with every babbling defensive post you make...
you're the prime example of someone who should keep their day job"

previous account(s):
www.soundcloud.com/somelittleboyinblue

Yours

simon-cameron fletcher

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