This is high level composing! Very goo harmony both instrumentally and vocally.

This track capture the mood of the lyrics so well. Very smoothly done.

Awesome track, guys! Great vocals delivery and lyrics, conveying the song's atmosphere.

I like the tempo of this song. Nice melodies and arrangements. Cool!

awesome song exceptional songwriting and composition skills

I love the chords progression. Beatles feeling in the voice. The verse are great and i think this is why you got sticked to it.  I would have loved also a real chorus with bright new chords to bring the song to another level. Still great song. congrats

Just one of my favorite bands for all they do…poetic, majestic, and warm

Boots On The Ground - Combstead / Robert Grigg

Piano Quintet No 1 - 3rd Movement Drums of Thunder (Virtual Pre-Premiere)

A song about loneliness and alienation, about feeling alone in a city full of people

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Watching the faded smiles
See these actors walking asleep
Like lifeboats stranded on the ocean
Floating alone

But down here in the dark
In this theatre of the cold and alone
No more hidden scars
Step out of the wings
Into the unknown

Look in my eyes
See how they shine bright
Watching our dreams take flight
As we sparkle and shine

Searching these darkened streets
For some trace of meaning
Lifeboats on the ocean
Tracing footsteps back home

But down here in the dark
In this theatre of the cold and alone
No more hidden scars
Step out of the wings
Into the unknown

Look in my eyes
See how they shine bright
Watching our dreams take flight
As we sparkle and shine

Lifeboats

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By Voicelight

A Life

Still working on my piano skills. LOL
Piano, Bass, Guitar, Composition, Mix and Mastering by Robert Grigg.

Chillin' an Grillin'

Slow day.
The holes in the clouds makes the 
dream fade.
The pills will not solve it.
No weekday.
Can ever replace the way friday. 
Can transform your world.
Oh, there's a girl.
A pain in your rib cage.
Is all.

Mind-frame.
Is not looking upwards in cold space.
Unravelling as you freeze in place.
The clock keeps on ticking.
You're blown away.
Out from the whirl.
Oh, there's a girl. a millstone you carry is all.

A down day.
Not looking outward but in.
Waste on the table is blown away. 
Can't make the connection between states.
Put on your act.
For the girl. 
She's all you have left in this world.

Oh, a fugue state.
Another enchantment is laid to waste.
Stare in the mirror.
Confused face,
Staring back outwardly fine.
What's mine is mine.
And the girl?
Becomes all-encompassing.




Slow Day

Mystic Country

Bully

Give Me A Better View.WAV

All music, written, arranged, mixed and mastered by Tobias Wolf.

Tobias Wolf - Bass, Guitars, Midi, Vocals 
JP Geoghegan - Drums

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Holding On

Wake Me Up

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