What a splendid song , really creative, thanks a lot for sharing

pleasantly surprised by the melodies, nice job [via https://sc.repostexchange.com]

Excellent song. A great intro and when the drums step in it starts together with the lyrics to a real good song. Like the way how it develops. I guess your influences come from somewhere like "The National" which the song reminds me of

Love the buildup in the intro!!  Sets the rhythm up really well.  Good vocal! Well done!!

Really liked the melody/voice/lyrics/drums

The intro grabs you. The lyrics and mood of the song are dark but inviting. Great vocal! 👏👏

very beautiful song, relaxing music with your voice, very beautiful lyrics I like it ""

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Track 9 from my album, Mass Formation (2022 Fauxtown Records).  Written and recorded by me.  Produced by Navidhmi.  Additional guitars by Ethan Richey.

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Thought I would give something different a try I have done a few not sure how they are sounding, so feedback always welcome.

A Dark Horse

There's a spark in the dark
A rhythm released from its toil at last tonight
The light is so stark
Is it the torch or a heavenly gleam that's so bright?

Well maybe it’s right
The blood in my mouth and over my hands is only mine
And maybe the light 
Is just the stars and the moon that won't align

St. Peter, he hid the keys tonight
And I know, I know

The city lights won't gleam for me
Not a star in the sky will shine for me
And I won't see you
I can see you up high, though I clipped your wings
You can't drag me up with pulleys or strings
But you won't, if you could

I think of you
By the lake that night, your shadow's cast was so bright
And I curse myself
And the folly of man when I took your hand too tight

And the serpent has a bed for me
And I know, I know

That I'm the villain in my own story
A beast in chains who doesn't find glory
And it's what I deserve
I see the mare tonight with the blood in its fur
Black eyes bulged out and then it turns to her
And I can't look away

The hour is soon to come
I see the veil stretched thin
I think of your rosy lips
And your alabaster skin

The waves break sudden and I'm under them
They drag me down and pull at my skin
And then I see them
All of the souls that I've thrown to waste
The bitter sting of their lives debased
I can't close my eyes
I see you again among the fading lights
In the faces of them on those cold dark nights
And I cannot breath
Maybe I'll see you again in my next life
Or maybe it's you holding up the knife
And then all is dark

Maybe there's no god's design
Maybe there's no god's design
Maybe there's no god's design
Maybe there's no god's design

The Light

Anonymous (Feat. Grizz)

Land of Hope

If you love something, set it free. If it comes back to you, it is yours forever. If not? It was never meant to be.....Richard Bach

The Greatest Thing

That day I met you
I had fallen instantly.
But I knew you were moving
cautiously towards me.

So I just cherished
every moment gratefully.
I took the time that you
would need to come to me.

We spent those first days sharing.
All our secrets we were baring.
I found a heart so caring.
You just blew me away.

How can a girl I just met,
sweep me up so fast? I don't get.
I knew years from now
I'd surely mark this day.

The greatest thing that ever happened to me
was finding my one true love, Shirley!

That girl had such a spirit,
confident and sure.
Within that heart there lived
a brilliant light so pure.

But there was still that unknown.
You could not yet see.
And came that fateful day
you broke it off with me.

-and so-

The hardest thing I've ever done
was walk away from only one.
The one who changed it all
in just a few short days.

But that's exactly what I did.
Became the man and shed the kid.
We said goodbye. I smiled
and drove away.

For months I waited for you faithfully.
Praying every day that somehow you would see.
 
Are you out there? Do you think of me?
Why can't you see that I'm your destiny?

I've blown my life up just to be with you.
And now I'm here alone, but baby where are you?

I kept the faith. I waited patiently.
I trusted God would grant my wish and let it be.

That day that you came back to me,
it still remains a mystery.
What happened deep within my heart,
I still can't say.

I truly felt you saved my life.
Still can't believe that you're my wife.
All started from a perfect summer day.

Sing!

The greatest thing that ever happened to me
was finding my one true love, Shirley.

My one true love, Shirley!

ChasinADream

The Greatest Thing

(Spotify Link)
https://open.spotify.com/album/48aDAQToviIWlNyH00Aiar?si=hA2atsuWQF6gS-lD2a2PHw

(Lyrics)
Save me, save me, oh somebody come and save me
Save me, save me, save me from this nightmare
Save me, save me, somebody come and save me
Save me, save me, save me from this nightmare

You don't know what I've been through
So don't pretend like you do
It's always all about you
It's always all about you
Now where did all the time go
I spent my money on dope
I'm feeling so fucking low
But I bet you wouldn't know

Slowly dying from all this poison
Trapped in this cycle
It's like a prison
Take me far away
I don't wanna stay
I don't wanna live
But I'm so afraid
Death's knocking and getting closer
If the Reaper takes me then I guess I'm going
At this rate, probably too late
But I still wish anyone could

Save me, save me, oh somebody come and save me
Save me, save me, save me from this nightmare
Save me, save me, somebody come and save me
Save me, save me, save me from this nightmare

If I know I wouldn't have fallen in this hole
And I know what I'm doing to help me cope is wrong yuh
I'm doing all this shit cause my life has lost it's meaning

The Light

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